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from the empty night we looked for what we had lost searching among stars groping for a chance to feel tomorrow under our feet
______________________________ For Nathan's Short Poem Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/8/2013 11:54:00 PM
I adore this!! Congrats, winner girl.
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:43:00 PM
Carrie congratulations on your sensational win. An incredible Tanka. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/8/2013 11:49:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations!!! nice to see you on Nates' winning list. By the looks of his winners, it seems as if he's a real picky person.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 6/8/2013 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations. A tender and touching poem.
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Date: 6/7/2013 8:29:00 PM
thank you
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Date: 6/3/2013 3:53:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 6/1/2013 2:55:00 PM
Wonderful, Carrie, this is how a short poem should be, packing a whallop!
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Date: 5/31/2013 10:54:00 PM
This really feels like a probing searchlight. Love, SuZ
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Date: 5/31/2013 5:50:00 PM
We do don't we.....lovely Carrie...
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