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I wrote this poem based upon a dream I recently had. Perhaps Jungian psychologists would find it worthy of interpretation.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ choking in a cloud of static dust I keep looking, distracted in the search by an idea cowering in the corner by a glimpse of angels in the dormer I trip and fall on the warped floor

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/25/2024 10:49:00 PM

This contains the very dust of inspiration Sara.'

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/26/2024 5:45:00 AM

thanks for the visit, Joe...and 'insoiration' = appropriate.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/25/2024 5:50:00 PM

There is so much inspiration hidden in attics and cubbyholes. Evil lurks, treasures unburied, reminders of lost loves. All waiting to be explored.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/26/2024 5:46:00 AM

well said, Jerry. I agree...the stuff of stories and poems :-) smile for the day, Sara

Deb M

Date: 1/25/2024 11:19:00 AM

Very interesting Sara….secrets in the attic!! Enjoyed….Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:20:00 PM

thanks, Deb....lots of secrets in even those metaphorical attics, smiles :-) sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/25/2024 8:33:00 AM

way to go Sara enjoyed this very much hugs Shadow ps I hope the bruise was not to painful

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:19:00 PM

aww thank you Shadow! Glad you enjoyed the read...yes, my deep bruises are finally healing and I can work and bend more normally. While using our workout equipment two weeks ago, it broke hurling me down to the ground....I"m lucky I only fractured my ribs and not my back. Whew, close call. Hope you're doing better...think of you often, hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/25/2024 7:05:00 AM

There are secrets and hidden memories in the attic, and there is magic in feelings. The fact that it makes me think about a variety of topics is what genuinely distinguishes this poem.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:18:00 PM

you're most kind, Sotto. I've always loved 'attic' poems and stories for their secrets and intrigue...the overarching subject of my first novel (Secrets at Dillehay Crossing) I'm glad my poem sparked a variety of subjects for you...those words mean a great deal, humbly grateful for your visit, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Mat Ignacio

Date: 1/24/2024 9:14:00 PM

engaging and wrapped in intrigue

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:28:00 AM

thank you, Mat...I was experimenting hoping to create the intrigue...grateful for your visit and comments. Have a pleasant day

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/24/2024 6:07:00 PM

Maybe you are being protected by Angels Love :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:29:00 AM

I like the way you think....bring on the angels :-) ! hugs, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/24/2024 6:06:00 PM

Words of magnetism and a detective story of what is in the attic? This poem is wonderful because it makes me think down various paths. Many questions remain.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:30:00 AM

thank you, Hilda. Grateful you saw beyond the words and felt the intrigue. What I was going for...it was a poetic experiment for me. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara