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Searching For the Key

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ive lost the key to your heart our love once flourished like a field of wild flowers blowing in a summer breeze , the freedom the unity,I search for the magical key that once brought us such happiness a key that unlocked all our dreams a key that unlocked all our desires a key that locked us together as one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/24/2010 12:33:00 PM
Really cool idea, Rick. I love how the line "that locked" makes up the teeth of the key. Great job and congrats!
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Date: 5/24/2010 12:33:00 PM
Big congrats Rick on your winning 4th place with this design and poem in the Concrete contest... read it before and knew it was a winner then... enjoy my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/12/2010 1:00:00 PM
Wow! Such a creative shape, Rick. And I like the twist at the end, reminding us that keys can both unlock and lock. Great entry for the contest! Best wishes for success, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2010 11:33:00 AM
Very nice entry Rick and good luck in the new contest... great words to match the key design..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/12/2010 9:11:00 AM
What a wonderful job you did...and I do know how hard it is to get a shape!!! And the verse is lovely too! Light & Love
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Date: 5/12/2010 4:02:00 AM
great conrete shape poem! I am impressed. I have a hard time with these types. Good day!!
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Date: 5/11/2010 10:35:00 PM
Nice shape Rick and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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