Searching For Rain

An expanse of pregnant clouds gather 
I hesitate mid-step in petrichor air
anticipating a breakthrough, a rumble 
the rain.

A lone desert tortoise roots for water
as he subsists on tiny droplets
he hunts for pearls of condensation
collecting on sparse foliage 
scarce puddles of liquid gold
that form in the early morning dew.

Searching for rain in the desert wastelands
a lone bald eagle scavenges for food 
to feed to her young fledglings
who eagerly await her return.

The desert languishes, barren and lifeless
waiting in anticipation at the dawn of day
day after day, month after month
until today...

As now, I look and wait, fresh rain appears
heaven sent, it's moist jewels escape
from the sky, falling down in heavy droplets
upon the thirsty ground
bringing new life to a dry and weary land.



Rewritten on 1/11/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/27/2016 12:37:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, Laura. Love the way you compare water to pearls, gold, and jewels painting a picture of its scarcity and precious value in the desert. Also love the phrase, "pregnant clouds". Great write, congrats on the win. Blessings ~ John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/27/2016 4:45:00 PM
I'm glad you liked this one, John! Living in California, rain is a very precious commodity, as you well know!
Date: 7/25/2016 3:49:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/25/2016 11:59:00 PM
Thank you, Lin :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/25/2016 11:59:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Sorry my earlier comment skipped to you!
Date: 7/25/2016 3:06:00 PM
Rain in the desert is very special. Well done in this contest, Laura. Nice to read you.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/26/2016 12:00:00 AM
Thank you, Lin :)
Date: 6/11/2016 2:38:00 PM
such wonderful imagery I especially love the pregnant clouds, pearls of condensation and liquid gold - great write Laura good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/11/2016 2:40:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Glad you liked this :)
Date: 6/11/2016 9:19:00 AM
And doesn't life return quickly when the rain finally falls. I was enchanted from the first, and smiling at the end. Great read.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/11/2016 2:32:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Scott. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 6/8/2016 1:57:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Laura. Yes, rain can be "liquid gold" when it is scarce. I like how your imagery paints the parched desert scene and how glorious it is when the clouds release the miracle they await. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/9/2016 8:44:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra, for stopping by and I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Rain is scarce here in southern California, and we always welcome it here!
Date: 6/8/2016 4:21:00 AM
Such a lovely way to describe rain - "pearls of condensation" "heaven sent, it's moist jewels escape from the sky":) Sure to win:) A #7:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/8/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. I try to find new ways to describe the "every day" things that we see. I appreciate your kind words :)
Date: 6/5/2016 11:13:00 PM
I liked the way you mentioned 'pregnant clouds'.....good luck in the contest!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/5/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thank you, Meenakshi! I appreciate your kind comments :)
Date: 6/5/2016 6:36:00 PM
Great imagery. An enjoyable read that drew me in. Good luck in all things ... CayCay
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/5/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thank you again, CayCay, for your kind response, and I'm happy you enjoyed my poem :)
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