John Freeman Poet Free verse

Seamless Wreaths

Cycles portray a continuum of seamless wreaths,
Wreaths of beauty portrayed in one cycle of love,
Love expressed in the flowers by the vine it cycles,
Cycles inwardly the bountiful nature of life,

Life is love’s action on all stages of life’s dramas,
Dramas of passions and dreams, life has many schemes,
Schemes of many senses; sounds, smells and feelings, life lives,
Lives as life confirms continuum of seamless wreaths!

For Contest: Christmas Wreath
In honor of Dr. Ram

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Nette Onclaud January 6, 2011 at 1:02 AM memorable piece... KUDOS to you, john :) nette

Sara Kendrick January 5, 2011 at 4:35 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2011 at 9:39 AM Congratulations on your win John in the "Christmas Wreath" contest by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin January 5, 2011 at 8:02 AM Hi John. Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Eamon

Daniel Cwiak January 5, 2011 at 5:56 AM Beautiful write, John. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Dr Hitendra Mehta January 4, 2011 at 9:48 PM oops erred in earlier msg........copy/paste error my friend....Many Congrats John for clinching third spot in this difficult yet interesting form of Dr Rams contest. Best wishes/Luv...Hitendra Mehta

Dr Hitendra Mehta January 4, 2011 at 9:44 PM Many Congrats Linda for clinching third spot in this difficult yet interesting form of Dr Rams contest. Best wishes/Luv...Hitendra Mehta

Wilma Neels January 4, 2011 at 4:29 AM A beautiful write John, congratulations on your awesome win in Dr. Ram's contest ;-)

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2011 at 9:33 PM Very nicely done, john. A big congratulations in this contest. Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan January 3, 2011 at 8:35 PM This is beautiful Moses.many congratulations for this super win.

Joyce Johnson January 3, 2011 at 5:23 PM A lovely and sensitive entry John. congratulations on your no. 3 Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire January 3, 2011 at 5:22 PM So happy to see your big win, John!! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick January 3, 2011 at 3:58 PM Very nice John..your poem is so very well done and so meaningful. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 3, 2011 at 3:53 PM Congrats Moses on your 3rd place win in Dr. Ram's wreath contest with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv tonight..

Dr.Ram Mehta January 3, 2011 at 3:29 PM Congratulations on the third place in my contest, John

Sara Kendrick December 11, 2010 at 3:45 PM Good luck in the contest..Interesting theme that you used in this work...Reads like a winner to me...Sara

Harry Horsman December 8, 2010 at 10:34 PM this is so good, so profound. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown December 8, 2010 at 4:08 AM I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us John. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. The very best to you in the contest. Love,Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta December 7, 2010 at 1:10 PM Thanks for participating in my contest, John

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 7, 2010 at 12:13 PM Excellent and exceptional piece Moses my friend.. great insight into the meaning and purpose of the holiday and the symbol of the wreath in perspective to living Life in luv and God.. good luck my friend in the contest...

Diane Locksley December 7, 2010 at 12:05 PM I must agree with the others John. This is superb! Good luck in the contest.

Carolyn Devonshire December 7, 2010 at 11:05 AM Some of the poems written in this form seem stilted, John, but yours flows effortlessly and beautifully. Always wisdom on love in your words! Hope your Christmas stocking fits your holiday decor, dear friend. A wonderful entry you have for Dr. Ram's contest. Sure to be a winner! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud December 7, 2010 at 11:04 AM such a well-penned poem that speaks of love eternal, john... my kind of a winning enrty! lots of luck in the contest... warmest, nette