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Seagulls Talking

Seagulls talking what's the matter? fussy squawking seagulls talking... Waddle walking pavement patter- Seagulls talking what's the matter? Birds discussing “Took my breadcrumb!” Angry fussing birds discussing seagull cussing “Hey, I want some!” birds discussing “Took my breadcrumb!”

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Date: 7/21/2019 11:08:00 PM
Just wanted to let you know I 'borrowed' this for the 20 titles from 20 friends' contest - I promise I'll return it in good condition!
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Rhona McFerran
Date: 7/22/2019 3:57:00 PM
Okay... just don't ruffle their feathers!! hahaha ;D
Date: 7/20/2019 8:17:00 PM
hmmm, it's kind of a triolet! The formatting is really awesome and I love this , Rhona.
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Rhona McFerran
Date: 7/22/2019 3:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! ;)
Date: 7/7/2019 1:29:00 AM
Very witty and playful poem here. Seagulls once took my bad of Takis and I was mad haha but I forgave them and got another bag later. -JWE
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Rhona McFerran
Date: 7/7/2019 10:07:00 PM
Thank you! ...Yeah, those seagulls are pretty greedy! ;D
Date: 6/1/2019 3:54:00 AM
I love seagulls. They took my Cornish pastry once and it hurt. But Jonathan Livingston Seagull rocks. Kind wishes, Kai
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Rhona McFerran
Date: 6/1/2019 5:48:00 PM
Yeah, seagulls are great (if a bit greedy)... Thanks, and kind wishes to you, too! ;)
Date: 4/18/2019 10:54:00 AM
This is exactly what seagulls sound like to me, great job!
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Rhona McFerran
Date: 4/18/2019 11:54:00 AM
Thanks, Michelle! ;))
Date: 4/10/2019 5:05:00 PM
Loving this one again as I notice that you cut the lines in half and did two triolets so ended up with about the same number of syllables as in one!!
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Rhona McFerran
Date: 4/10/2019 9:58:00 PM
I can't take credit for the clever idea of splitting the lines up... as I mimicked this form from a poetry reference book! ;)
Date: 4/7/2019 2:49:00 PM
Adorable and whimsical. Loved this
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Rhona McFerran
Date: 4/7/2019 11:03:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! ;)
Date: 4/4/2019 7:10:00 AM
...sounds like dinner in a house full of kids.....
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Rhona McFerran
Date: 4/4/2019 8:14:00 PM
Hahahaha! Hadn't thought of it that way... but it does! ;)
Date: 4/4/2019 6:01:00 AM
Well, that is rather a great offense, e.g., to take one's bread crumb. You have painted the perfect cartoon image of seagulls chit-chatting. A "Fav".
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Rhona McFerran
Date: 4/4/2019 8:13:00 PM
Aaawww, thank you!! So glad you enjoyed it, my friend! ;)
Date: 4/3/2019 9:50:00 PM
Bow! Bam! Crack! This poem reminds me of all the most fun reasons I love onomatopoeia! Which brings me to another thought. You have created such a fun, whimsical darling poem! I can hardly wait to see what you will be posting tomorrow night, my soul sister!
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Rhona McFerran
Date: 4/3/2019 11:02:00 PM
This poem literally swooped down in front of me today! I'd just gotten out of my car (in a grocery store lot) when these seagulls landed in front of me and waddled around fussing over some bread someone had thrown on the pavement... It tickled me so much I had to scribble something down right away! ;D