Seagulls

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SEAGULLS Squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine Expert efficient on hunting skill Unique distinct character superfine. Adaptable always venturing thrill. Expert efficient on hunting skill They drop mollusk to hit rock breaking shell. Adaptable always venturing thrill, They throw bread- crumbs to attract fish as well. They drop mollusk to hit rock breaking shell, They transfer all techniques to the offspring They throw bread- crumbs to attract fish as well, follow ploughs for underground food to bring. They transfer all techniques to the offspring Seagulls symbolize, clarify freedom follow ploughs for underground food to bring. Resourceful favorable broad spectrum. Seagulls symbolize, clarify freedom Unique distinct character superfine Resourceful favorable broad spectrum. Squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine. 12/02/19 Second Place 'Seagulls' Contest by Eve Roper.

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Na Na

Date: 12/20/2019 2:06:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Anisha

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 10:37:00 PM

Beautifully done, Anisha. Bravo!

Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/6/2019 8:51:00 AM

Thanks Caren. I am whelmed as you have gone through all my recent poems

Na Na

Date: 12/2/2019 2:18:00 PM

There you go its beautiful and proclaimed. I hope you didnt mind me telling you about the main part. I just wouldnt want yours not to place cause you left something out. I will be back to congratulate you on this fine piece :)

Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/2/2019 10:20:00 PM

Gregory, I an thankful n grateful to you for pointing the mistake. I was completely unaware as I have not noticed. Thanks again.

Na Na

Date: 12/2/2019 2:03:00 AM

Hi Anisha very nice poem and you did it well but I think you have to add the Squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine" somewhere in the poem. Other than that its perfect Thanks for sharing

Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/2/2019 10:06:00 AM

I have not noticed the instruction by Eve Roper. Thank You. I am rewriting.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/2/2019 9:55:00 AM

Thanks Gregory for suggestion. I am thinking.