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Sea the Lover

Slowly I was sinking in my dream water touching and caressing me sea was my lover it seemed silently exploring this body. Water touching and caressing me whispering some love talk in my ear silently exploring this body 'Let us make aquatic love dear'. Whispering some love talk in my ear hynotizing with womanly fragrance 'Let us make aquatic love dear' thus started a man and sea's romance. Hypnotizing with womanly fragrance discovering each and every corner thus started a man and sea's romance she was such a great lover! Discovering each and every corner breathing her in and out breathlessly she was such a great lover entwining with her infinitely. Breathing her in and out breathlessly sea was my lover it seemed entwining with her infinitely slowly I was sinking in my dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/17/2012 8:23:00 AM
A grande write, Kash! Its sublime in sea really huge. Congrats!!!
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Date: 4/10/2012 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2012 6:29:00 PM
Kash, I remember this gem. Congratulations. and soupmail
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Date: 4/6/2012 5:06:00 AM
oh like this Kash really nice, congratulations xx
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:35:00 AM
congrats Kash on a wonderful write and well deserved win for another rare beauty entry luv.. happy easterr blessings too..
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Date: 4/5/2012 7:00:00 PM
A very amourous take on the theme, an ocean of love! Congrad's on your win!
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Date: 4/5/2012 4:35:00 PM
This is beautiful from a romantic perspective. Very nicely done.. Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting for my contest. love, gautami
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Date: 4/2/2012 1:33:00 AM
Kash you do this form so well, very good,,David
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Date: 3/30/2012 12:47:00 AM
ck your soup mail kash- -
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Date: 3/29/2012 10:28:00 PM
Just here to say hi and goodbye!!
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Date: 3/29/2012 3:47:00 PM
yeooow, my heart is swimming in your sea, kashi.. back after the holiday and days of med check-ups!.. love this pantoum delight!.. missed ya, bud!... hugggs! :)
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Date: 3/28/2012 10:10:00 PM
Gosh, Kashinath, you sure did splendidly with the theme and form of pantoum here. Again, the pantoum king reigns!
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Date: 3/28/2012 9:48:00 PM
How amazing that the final line ENDED up being the FINAL LINE...such a powerful phrase to end this sensual write, Kash..Never would I have imagined a pantoum entry for Gauti's contest..It will certainly wow here as each line feels like an ocean wave rolling my mind towards relaxation..Very challenged with writing of the sea...perhaps a trip there would change that for me...hope u are doing well, Kash... Gwendolen
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Date: 3/28/2012 8:08:00 PM
This is the first time I have read a pantoum. I like the wasy certain lines repeat and emphasize images. Nicely rhymed also.
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