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Sea Song

There's a tune playing on the waves Leaving its melody on shore Its ebb and flow trickles into caves Then returns to renew its song once more Weaving in and out of dreams As moonbeams glimmer on its surface Bringing visions of crystal streams Playing refrains with grace Dreams travel until dawn As stars slowly fade from the sky Sunshine replaces moonbeams Yet the sea still plays a lullaby 3-9-20244

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Date: 3/17/2024 10:27:00 AM
Beautiful visualisation with elegant similies of dream, sea, lilt, rhythm and the surroundings
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Date: 3/13/2024 4:15:00 PM
Absolutely lovely enjoyed reading your work here.
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Date: 3/12/2024 1:42:00 PM
This poem does bring to my mind the sounds of the sea. The lullaby sounds are best. I liked it.
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Date: 3/11/2024 10:43:00 PM
So beautiful is the music of the waves. Your poems in general are so calming and your rhymes are beautiful with an easy flow. Have a happy day, dear Joseph.
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Date: 3/11/2024 2:46:00 PM
love this beautiful write - especially liked the last line
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Date: 3/11/2024 2:26:00 AM
This poem sends me in a calm and beautiful mood.
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Date: 3/10/2024 5:57:00 PM
your poem felt magical, almost mystical. Loved 'dreams travel until dawn' Those words spoke to my soul. Your words were melodious, like a song... :-) have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 3/10/2024 12:35:00 PM
It is like you wrote your own shanty here... your poem rhymes and flows really well..
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Date: 3/10/2024 5:57:00 AM
This is so melodic and indeed a song I can just hear the music! Your imagination is amazing and the way you put these words together perfectly recreates the ambience of the beach ocean etc! Is this for contest? Great job!
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Date: 3/10/2024 3:06:00 AM
Dear joseph, i love sea songs, and my mermaid heart cant help but sing along to those waves crashing in such captivating cadence throughout so well crafted and delivered, i love “ dreams travel until dawn” ah so beautiful! “ sunshine replaces moonbeams” the way you paint imagery is magical and worthy of a fave! Pleasure reading this
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Date: 3/9/2024 6:23:00 PM
When the sea plays a lullaby, thoughts caress a daydream. This is so dreamy and romantic. My heart is smiling and floating. :) I love everything about the sea and the melody it creates. My beat to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/9/2024 5:52:00 PM
Dear Joe, Your poem echoes the timeless melody of the ocean, creating tranquility and wonder. Through your words, me the reader is transported to the shore, where the ebb and flow of the waves become a symphony of nature's harmony. I love how your imagery evokes a sense of serenity and renewal, as the sea's song continues to echo through dreams and dawn alike. Wow, you captured the beauty of the ocean's lullaby in such graceful verses. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/9/2024 3:29:00 PM
So very beautiful and serene Joseph! Debx
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Date: 3/9/2024 3:28:00 PM
Sea song echoes throughout, Joseph. You captured the delight of nature's melodies emanating from land a sea. A lovely sound you convey--indeed as lullaby.
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Date: 3/9/2024 1:21:00 PM
How beautiful this is, Joseph.
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