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Sea of Unrest

A weight bound tight inside of her prison, Does no man acquire the strength that's due? She sinks down deep as high tide has risen, As her figure's swallowed by darkest blue Resignating, do her lungs open so, Oh, how she opens the gate to her death; Crushed by the pressure, she rocks to and fro', Not even with closure of one last breath The waves crash above and smother below, It was the blackest of waters she'd known; Suddenly, pressure was letting her go, And the most loveliest light was then shown A pair of hands came for me, cold and wet; Eyes upon me, and but a lovers set.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 5/28/2012 9:19:00 PM
love it!
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Date: 5/28/2012 1:35:00 PM
Beauty! :o)
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Date: 5/4/2012 7:19:00 AM
This is one well written write dear poet ! It definitely entices to read to its end, and desires for it to continue ! *smiles* Great write Dana'lynn ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james
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Date: 5/2/2012 1:53:00 AM
Dana' very good sonnet,..David
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Date: 5/1/2012 7:14:00 PM
Smile ˜ Makes Me Think Of The Movie, 'Creature From The Black Lagoon' ˜ Hahaha, I Love Your Beautifully Creative Poem, My Dear Beautiful Dana'lynn * If This Stirring Moment Is For A Contest Then Lovely Beauty Should Do Quite Well; Muy Magnifico ˜ My Love to You, John!:) ˜
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Date: 5/1/2012 7:25:00 PM
Thank you so much. I would enter it in a contest, but my membership has not shown up yet and I'm not sure why... my dad isn't going to buy it AGAIN so I'm thinking I'll be non-member for a while..

Date: 5/1/2012 7:15:00 PM
...."Tis Suppose To Read, 'Your Lovely Beauty.'" *