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Sea of the Sky

Clouds float in the sea of the sky Reflections in water, a mirror below Thoughts float and I wonder why Scenes of perfection are missed so Reflections in water, a mirror below A picture before me, brings serenity Scenes of perfection are missed so Those who forget to look and see A picture before me brings serenity Thoughts float and I wonder why Those who forget to look and see Clouds float in the sea of the sky Heidi Sands 6/9/17

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Edward Mccall

Date: 6/15/2017 8:40:00 AM

Beautiful Heidi in it goes. :)" :)"

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2017 11:13:00 AM

Thank you Edward. I am happy you like this. :)

Roy Pett

Date: 6/12/2017 8:28:00 AM

Excellent pantoum Heidi, I find this to be a difficult form you have done an amazing job, great rhyme and flows really well. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2017 6:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Roy. I just started to do them. :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/11/2017 2:19:00 PM

Another beautiful write, Heidi. You craft your words w/deep spirituality. Your soulful words shines so brilliantly. Excellent poem. Love always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2017 3:58:00 PM

Hi Freddie. I appreciate your positive feedback. I have been practicing these new Pantoum form poems. Thank you for your kindness and support. I am grateful :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/9/2017 7:17:00 PM

Miss Heidi this is a beautiful reflection of your beautiful Art work. Awesome job girl... hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2017 7:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Akkina. I appreciate your support and comment! :)