Sea Of Tears


Waves surge shards of horizon to the beach,
the sea of tears keeps nothing,
memories float ashore.

March 22, 2019
Syllable count : 10/7/6
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Contest : Writing Challenge 4, March 2019-Kimo
Sponsor : Dear Heart

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2019 5:26:00 PM

wow, this is amazing. Congrats, Subimal.

P.S. AWTRY

Date: 5/18/2019 7:37:00 AM

Powerful picture! Congratulations :)

Debjani Mitra

Date: 5/17/2019 10:16:00 PM

Congrats Subimal da... There's absolutely no end to the ways poets can be philosophical about the sea.. and you do it with élan.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/17/2019 7:56:00 PM

Beautiful, potent, dramatic, emotional brevity, Subimal. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Maureen McGreavy

Date: 5/17/2019 3:29:00 PM

Epic, in a tiny package,lovely done. Congratulations for your win! xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/17/2019 1:56:00 PM

Lovely poem, Subimal. Congrats on your win.

Dear Heart

Date: 3/25/2019 2:34:00 PM

Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love any poem about the sea, well done ~

Sunshine Smile

Date: 3/24/2019 8:22:00 AM

- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunshine Smile

Date: 3/22/2019 4:27:00 AM

- Touching and great written, Subimal :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)