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Scratches on important records

Take me in Cater to my every whim Show me what it is to be a child For I feel I've only ever ran wild My unfair reviews leave all mouths agape I'm surely wrong, need to rewatch tape Composite detracts from all that good I'd splice and edit more if I could I can't make sense of swirling scenes As overlaid are hapless themes Victims of just existing I wish to let it go as sanity risking Abandoned and wanted - an ugly dance Just wait it out in terrified trance Like girl beneath music box lid No it wasn't that bad, heaven forbid

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Date: 8/23/2024 7:20:00 PM
Opinions are just opinions. I too dislike them. I like your victorious ending.
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Date: 8/23/2024 11:42:00 PM
True, even my own vary dramatically depending on the moment.

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