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Scissors

“And you may love me like a saint, but you’ll lose faith eventually” – Cut the String, Mother Mother

I’ve got the scissors ready—
Never been one to cut straight,
But let me tell you—I cut just the same!
After all, it helps me breathe, when you’re away

Now I don’t mean that in a horrible sense
Where’s the lines that make it easier to cut?
You learn to go around the edges
In a circular manner,
So not to hurt their pride
Get out of here!

I didn’t sprinkle sugar on your wound
So that you could see how sweet I could maim you  
And I don’t expect you to be assured with the truth
Because the truth isn’t always an oxygen tank
Reality is the true gravity
The one that pushes you to the ground
And it will set you straight

It is fun when you duet with your imagined fate
But it’s a slap in the face when you wake up to your own wails
At 4:00 AM 
Writhing in unfathomable sorrows
It’s a ceaseless solo of defeat,
And the scissors are so near and dear
It is like I am ready
Armed for the foreseen pain again
Because pains are split moments
And your love is dangerously inconclusive

So I’ve got the scissors ready—
Never been one to cut straight,
But let me tell you—I cut just the same!
I’m ready to breathe when you are…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Asuncion Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 8:19 PM
Laura, such a well expressed poem... Simply superb.... Please read my new poem LOVE ALWAYS UNDERSTANDS.... Thank.....
Breidenthal Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 3:39 AM
Thanks Bernard, for stopping by to read this one. <3 ~Laura
Warrior Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 6:23 AM
You have a special talent, my friend...you are a narrator of your inner soul...and give life to inanimate objects...which seem to have a purpose in your verses( it's the poet in me lol)...love and light...^WW^
Breidenthal Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 6:08 PM
WW - I love it! lol Thanks for the kind words! Will be checking out your page real soon.
Ashley Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Laura, an exquisite and expressive poem of a turbulent relationship (maybe with someone else maybe with yourself..) and your need to be free of certain aspects of it. Independent, honest (the sharp edge of truth can cut both ways though..), free of what is or who is smothering you. An intense, dramatic write that held me emotionally captive.. Your voice is so lovely, as well. I enjoy your deep expression. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Breidenthal Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 1:59 AM
Your comments are thoughtful and sharp as ever, Susan. Thank you for such encouraging words! <3 ~Laura
Callus Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 5:03 PM
An expressive poem which tends to lead us up different paths, and yet leaves us unsure of the destination. A mother-child relationship, starting from birth and continuing beyond that. ~ Enjoyed how it evolved...and the accompanying live recording is an added bonus. Regards // paul
Breidenthal Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 12:37 AM
Thoughtful and interesting review, Paul. Thanks so much. <3~Laura
Wanter Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Very good! Both poem and voice! I wonder if my daughter feels that way about me?
Breidenthal Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Thanks! This one has much to ponder on. The truth can be cutting. <3 ~Laura
Messina Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Hi Laura, I don't blame Maria for being nervous, I thought you may have been the sister of Edward Scissor Hands..lol But all do respect and joking aside, very nicely written.. All the best....Charlie
Breidenthal Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 10:59 AM
lol (: I can cut your hedges for ya if that's whatya want! gee. ;D Thanks for stopping by. <3~Laura
Williams Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 12:26 AM
Wow, what expression in your voice Laura. Are you an actress? Certainly very accomplished and talented.Your voice is beautiful as well. I was spellbound from start to finish, but a bit nervous about those scissors too. A Fave for sure and a wonderful write....Maria :) xxx
Breidenthal Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 12:45 AM
Being left handed, I always cut awkwardly. lol This world was not made for left-handers apparently. Thanks so much Maria, you are so very kind to stop by. <3 ~Laura
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April 18, 2018 at 10:44 AM
so beautiful write about scissors ""I didn’t sprinkle sugar on your wound So that you could see how sweet I could maim you "" in our country we use salt instead of sugar on wounds......... any way it is a brilliant writing.
Breidenthal Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 12:42 AM
A little bit of a play on words there, Muhammad. I'm happy you liked those lines. I appreciate your input, thank you very much. <3~Laura
DiMino Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 10:30 PM
Really well written. Keep writing Laura, you have a gift.
Breidenthal Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 12:40 AM
That's kind of you to say Joe. Thanks for stopping by <3~Laura
Lamoureux Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 8:32 AM
This is hard to read but like all good art it makes me feel. You should be very proud of this piece. I feel the heartache and for a few moments I could not breathe. Exceptional.
Breidenthal Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 12:40 AM
Thanks so much for checking this one out Richard. It's one of those pieces that just spills. I'm happy with how it turned out.<3~ Laura
Michael Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 8:16 AM
I like it...personality brings poem alive...Do some more with your voice...All the best Laura...
Breidenthal Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:19 AM
Thanks Arturo. I appreciate it. Here and there, I surely will. <3 ~Laura
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