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“And you may love me like a saint, but you’ll lose faith eventually” – Cut the String, Mother Mother I’ve got the scissors ready— Never been one to cut straight, But let me tell you—I cut just the same! After all, it helps me breathe, when you’re away Now I don’t mean that in a horrible sense Where’s the lines that make it easier to cut? You learn to go around the edges In a circular manner, So not to hurt their pride Get out of here! I didn’t sprinkle sugar on your wound So that you could see how sweet I could maim you And I don’t expect you to be assured with the truth Because the truth isn’t always an oxygen tank Reality is the true gravity The one that pushes you to the ground And it will set you straight It is fun when you duet with your imagined fate But it’s a slap in the face when you wake up to your own wails At 4:00 AM Writhing in unfathomable sorrows It’s a ceaseless solo of defeat, And the scissors are so near and dear It is like I am ready Armed for the foreseen pain again Because pains are split moments And your love is dangerously inconclusive So I’ve got the scissors ready— Never been one to cut straight, But let me tell you—I cut just the same! I’m ready to breathe when you are…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/6/2018 8:19:00 PM
Laura, such a well expressed poem... Simply superb.... Please read my new poem LOVE ALWAYS UNDERSTANDS.... Thank.....
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/13/2018 3:39:00 AM
Thanks Bernard, for stopping by to read this one. <3 ~Laura
Date: 5/16/2018 6:23:00 AM
You have a special talent, my friend...you are a narrator of your inner soul...and give life to inanimate objects...which seem to have a purpose in your verses( it's the poet in me lol)...love and light...^WW^
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/16/2018 6:08:00 PM
WW - I love it! lol Thanks for the kind words! Will be checking out your page real soon.
Date: 5/10/2018 9:27:00 PM
Laura, an exquisite and expressive poem of a turbulent relationship (maybe with someone else maybe with yourself..) and your need to be free of certain aspects of it. Independent, honest (the sharp edge of truth can cut both ways though..), free of what is or who is smothering you. An intense, dramatic write that held me emotionally captive.. Your voice is so lovely, as well. I enjoy your deep expression. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/15/2018 1:59:00 AM
Your comments are thoughtful and sharp as ever, Susan. Thank you for such encouraging words! <3 ~Laura
Date: 5/2/2018 5:03:00 PM
An expressive poem which tends to lead us up different paths, and yet leaves us unsure of the destination. A mother-child relationship, starting from birth and continuing beyond that. ~ Enjoyed how it evolved...and the accompanying live recording is an added bonus. Regards // paul
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/3/2018 12:37:00 AM
Thoughtful and interesting review, Paul. Thanks so much. <3~Laura
Date: 4/30/2018 6:15:00 PM
Very good! Both poem and voice! I wonder if my daughter feels that way about me?
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/1/2018 11:02:00 AM
Thanks! This one has much to ponder on. The truth can be cutting. <3 ~Laura
Date: 4/25/2018 4:19:00 PM
Hi Laura, I don't blame Maria for being nervous, I thought you may have been the sister of Edward Scissor Hands..lol But all do respect and joking aside, very nicely written.. All the best....Charlie
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/1/2018 10:59:00 AM
lol (: I can cut your hedges for ya if that's whatya want! gee. ;D Thanks for stopping by. <3~Laura
Date: 4/19/2018 12:26:00 AM
Wow, what expression in your voice Laura. Are you an actress? Certainly very accomplished and talented.Your voice is beautiful as well. I was spellbound from start to finish, but a bit nervous about those scissors too. A Fave for sure and a wonderful write....Maria :) xxx
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/19/2018 12:45:00 AM
Being left handed, I always cut awkwardly. lol This world was not made for left-handers apparently. Thanks so much Maria, you are so very kind to stop by. <3 ~Laura
Date: 4/18/2018 10:44:00 AM
so beautiful write about scissors ""I didn’t sprinkle sugar on your wound So that you could see how sweet I could maim you "" in our country we use salt instead of sugar on wounds......... any way it is a brilliant writing.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/19/2018 12:42:00 AM
A little bit of a play on words there, Muhammad. I'm happy you liked those lines. I appreciate your input, thank you very much. <3~Laura
Date: 4/14/2018 10:30:00 PM
Really well written. Keep writing Laura, you have a gift.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/19/2018 12:40:00 AM
That's kind of you to say Joe. Thanks for stopping by <3~Laura
Date: 4/14/2018 8:32:00 AM
This is hard to read but like all good art it makes me feel. You should be very proud of this piece. I feel the heartache and for a few moments I could not breathe. Exceptional.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/19/2018 12:40:00 AM
Thanks so much for checking this one out Richard. It's one of those pieces that just spills. I'm happy with how it turned out.<3~ Laura
Date: 4/14/2018 8:16:00 AM
I like it...personality brings poem alive...Do some more with your voice...All the best Laura...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/15/2018 1:19:00 AM
Thanks Arturo. I appreciate it. Here and there, I surely will. <3 ~Laura

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