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Schoolyard Stories

At lunchtime all the boys would gather round Tell us another story, they would say And I would wonder, why they wanted me With nothing in my head, nothing today Still I’d start and before I knew it, hey Out the tale would come, so easy you see. Arms clasped on their knees, sitting on the ground Looking at me to start ; words to foray. Sentences begin to flow, follow me Their eyes locked, their ears cocked, all in dismay. Well into the story, the more I’d play With their imagination, let run free. I wonder what was in their heads, as I Contrived, I so shy, epics, my oh my!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/31/2010 7:16:00 PM
stories are always great to tell, and not only that, but if its interesting, a blast to tell(: ~Always&Forever LYnette
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Date: 7/31/2010 6:25:00 PM
A story teller and a poet.. what wonderful traits ..what a glorious combination David... and now u entertain all of us.. kudos my friend for a great write .. refreshing to read..with luv..
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Date: 7/30/2010 8:03:00 PM
Your stories made a difference to their world without knowing it. Very nice write, David, thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:18:00 PM
really? funny.
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Date: 7/30/2010 4:55:00 AM
Good morning !!!!!Oh my David, that is something I would wonder on,,Wow! one would consider that to be interesting,, Thanks for sharing,..Have a wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 7/30/2010 12:07:00 AM
It's a perfect English with nice theme. Enjoyed it, David
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:47:00 PM
Greatly written David,It seems from an early age you had great imagination and creativity,even if you were the timid kind of shy guy,and that last 'my oh my'made me think of a song with that refrain,My oh My. .Maybe one day you could give us a short story,It would be interesting. .C.C.
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:39:00 PM
Re your question on my comment-Cloud nine is the cloud where one finds extreme happiness,fantasy of course :)..Now let me read you. .
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Date: 7/29/2010 8:47:00 PM
I like how you modernized the sonnet here, David, writing on a non traditional sonnet topic. I try to do that alot with my sonnets too. Luv, Andrea
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