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Scent of the Lost Land

Cities have grown fast in all directions, used for construction, green thickets aren’t seen. I’m in concrete jungle of dejection, a dug up tree, I miss emerald sheen. I wish to go back where I had once been. I recall the hamlet where I was born, childhood memories are pictures I see, jade tapestry I found the fields adorn. Land and sky made pair of rapture for me, I absorbed nature’s elements with glee. After hot summer when the first rains fell, the parched land exhaled the scent of drenched earth, soaked me with nature’s whiff I loved to smell. The scent still wafts in me, knowing its worth, I’ll be in the lost land in my next birth. ____________________ July 6, 2022 Theme chosen : Nature Syllable count : 10 per line Checked at howmanysyllables.com Rhyme checked at Rhymezone.com Contest : It's All About Three Q's Sponsored by : Constance La France

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Date: 8/5/2022 5:59:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest with your beautiful Quintain, excellent writing, blessings ~ Constance
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Date: 8/1/2022 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write/story. Love your line, "I’ll be in the lost land in my next birth." Have a great/blessed day.......................
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