Scent of a Memory

No warning, in the house a silence fell,
pitch darkness, and the minutes slowly passed,
how long this cut would last no-one could tell.
Match sparked, the flame flickered, a spell was cast
the amber light was filled with visions past.

The smell of warm wax peeled away the years
to Reigate school, Miss Leggett's class, midday,
the noonday sun blazed bright and playtime neared
so time to put our drawing things away,
school milk gulped down, and rushing off to play.

Warm crayons in a box on windowsill,
the sides speckled with marks when taken out,
a pleasing smell that lingers with me still
token of what my childhood was about.
Power back, candle and memory blown out.

19th February 2018
For contest 'The scent of baking bread...', sponsor Sara Kendrick
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Steele Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:02 PM
Congrats, Viv. Cleverly written. Well deserved win.
Wigley Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 6:57 AM
Thanks Randy, much appreciated. Regards, Viv
Steele Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Congrats, Viv. Cleverly written. Well deserved win.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Back with congrats , Viv. Wishing you many power outages !!
Wigley Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Thanks Line, don't mind power cuts during the lighter months x
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Congrats on your win, Viv. Loved the uniqueness of yours. I am seeing So many great winners. They are all so deserving!! (I'd have gone with gasoline but I wanted one whose taste I loved as much as the smell)
Wigley Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 1:34 AM
Thanks Andrea, I still think you should have gone for the gas x
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 4:51 PM
I enjoyed reading this one. I especially liked the closing line for it gave a closure and completeness to the poem. I remember the scent of those crayons from long ago as well. Thanks for participating in my contest. It was a please to place yours on the winners' list. Sara
Wigley Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 1:34 AM
Thanks, Sara, enjoyed the contest and always enjoy a bit of nostalgia x
Allison Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 12:33 PM
great storytelling Mr Viv ... but ugh school milk warm from being put by the radiators... i hated it! congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 1:35 AM
Thanks Jan, our milk was left out in the corridor for that reason. Didn't make a lot of difference, though. Viv x
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:47 AM
Congratulations on your win, Viv with such a wonderfully nostalgic poem.
Wigley Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 1:35 AM
Thanks, Subimal, enjoyed the contest. regards, Viv
Talbot Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:21 AM
Congratulations Viv, took me back to my last school in Germany as a child, not crayons, the old powder watercolour paint, messy or what! Thanks for that... Mick
Gupta Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 10:40 PM
It is a comfort to relate to this beautiful poem ... Congratulations on your top win, Viv ...
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Back with congratulations on your win! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories!!!
Cunningham Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations Viv. Tom
Inman Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Wonderfully touching write Viv.
Ashley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 10:22 PM
Such a great story, Viv told in a wonderfully nostalgic style, that brought me there to your classroom with those crayons, smelling the smell of warm crayons on the windowsill. I love how your first stanza takes me with you into your nostalgia. A vivid and captivating write. Best wishes for a win but already a winner with me. ~Susan
Wigley Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 3:30 AM
Thanks, Susan, very kind. True story, by the way. I had just got back from a battlefield tour of the Somme, walked through the door to greet my cat, when the power went. Candles always to hand. Viv x
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 5:27 PM
I adore gas stations. But nowadays I do not smell gas when I go to the gas station. I wonder why that is!!
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:51 AM
Probably due to unleaded,Andrea. I remember fifty years ago standing behind the only Mustang 428 I'd ever seen in England when it fired up. Unforgettable smell. x
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 5:26 PM
wow, I think this is the finest poem I've seen yet on this topic. The way you did it was so nostalgic!! Sara wants us to use truly good smells but my favorites were glue and gasoline so I am not sure how those would go over!! (and I only mean the elmer's glue from school time. haha)
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:52 AM
Go for it, Andrea, I don't think she's after the smell of Donuts or baby's diapers x
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Wonderful write, Viv , you did this form so well. You made remember the smell of crayons taken them out to color. luck in the contest Hugs Eve ~`*
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:52 AM
Thanks Eve, I do like nostalgia. Viv x
Krampe Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Great storytelling, Viv - and I know exactly what you mean. I find that smells often trigger vivid memories.
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:53 AM
Thanks Agnes, all of the senses can bring such rich pickings, can't they ? Viv x
Gauthier Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 12:55 PM
Warm wax - what an original take on nostalgic reminiscing. Wonderfully executed and delivered, Viv.
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:53 AM
Thanks, Line, I should wish for power cuts more often. Regards, Viv
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February 19, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Masterfully renedered memory! It was a pleasure to read this one Viv.
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:54 AM
Thanks, Richard, a pleasure to recount. Regards, Viv
Vaso Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 1:31 AM
Brings back my own memories this! Thus a great write.
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:54 AM
Thanks Arthur, such a long time ago and so precious. Regards, Viv
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 1:24 AM
- A lovely memory in the light of candles, Viv - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, yes, special times. Viv x
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