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No warning, in the house a silence fell, pitch darkness, and the minutes slowly passed, how long this cut would last no-one could tell. Match sparked, the flame flickered, a spell was cast the amber light was filled with visions past. The smell of warm wax peeled away the years to Reigate school, Miss Leggett's class, midday, the noonday sun blazed bright and playtime neared so time to put our drawing things away, school milk gulped down, and rushing off to play. Warm crayons in a box on windowsill, the sides speckled with marks when taken out, a pleasing smell that lingers with me still token of what my childhood was about. Power back, candle and memory blown out. 19th February 2018 For contest 'The scent of baking bread...', sponsor Sara Kendrick

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Date: 4/1/2018 7:02:00 PM
Congrats, Viv. Cleverly written. Well deserved win.
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Date: 4/2/2018 6:57:00 AM
Thanks Randy, much appreciated. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/1/2018 7:01:00 PM
Congrats, Viv. Cleverly written. Well deserved win.
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Date: 3/30/2018 8:06:00 PM
Back with congrats , Viv. Wishing you many power outages !!
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Date: 3/31/2018 1:33:00 AM
Thanks Line, don't mind power cuts during the lighter months x
Date: 3/30/2018 7:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Viv. Loved the uniqueness of yours. I am seeing So many great winners. They are all so deserving!! (I'd have gone with gasoline but I wanted one whose taste I loved as much as the smell)
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Date: 3/31/2018 1:34:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I still think you should have gone for the gas x
Date: 3/30/2018 4:51:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one. I especially liked the closing line for it gave a closure and completeness to the poem. I remember the scent of those crayons from long ago as well. Thanks for participating in my contest. It was a please to place yours on the winners' list. Sara
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Date: 3/31/2018 1:34:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, enjoyed the contest and always enjoy a bit of nostalgia x
Date: 3/30/2018 12:33:00 PM
great storytelling Mr Viv ... but ugh school milk warm from being put by the radiators... i hated it! congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/31/2018 1:35:00 AM
Thanks Jan, our milk was left out in the corridor for that reason. Didn't make a lot of difference, though. Viv x
Date: 3/30/2018 1:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Viv with such a wonderfully nostalgic poem.
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Date: 3/31/2018 1:35:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal, enjoyed the contest. regards, Viv
Date: 3/30/2018 1:21:00 AM
Congratulations Viv, took me back to my last school in Germany as a child, not crayons, the old powder watercolour paint, messy or what! Thanks for that... Mick
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Date: 3/29/2018 10:40:00 PM
It is a comfort to relate to this beautiful poem ... Congratulations on your top win, Viv ...
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Date: 3/29/2018 9:48:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/29/2018 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories!!!
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Date: 3/29/2018 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations Viv. Tom
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Date: 3/6/2018 8:19:00 AM
Wonderfully touching write Viv.
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Date: 2/21/2018 10:22:00 PM
Such a great story, Viv told in a wonderfully nostalgic style, that brought me there to your classroom with those crayons, smelling the smell of warm crayons on the windowsill. I love how your first stanza takes me with you into your nostalgia. A vivid and captivating write. Best wishes for a win but already a winner with me. ~Susan
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Date: 2/22/2018 3:30:00 AM
Thanks, Susan, very kind. True story, by the way. I had just got back from a battlefield tour of the Somme, walked through the door to greet my cat, when the power went. Candles always to hand. Viv x
Date: 2/20/2018 5:27:00 PM
I adore gas stations. But nowadays I do not smell gas when I go to the gas station. I wonder why that is!!
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:51:00 AM
Probably due to unleaded,Andrea. I remember fifty years ago standing behind the only Mustang 428 I'd ever seen in England when it fired up. Unforgettable smell. x
Date: 2/20/2018 5:26:00 PM
wow, I think this is the finest poem I've seen yet on this topic. The way you did it was so nostalgic!! Sara wants us to use truly good smells but my favorites were glue and gasoline so I am not sure how those would go over!! (and I only mean the elmer's glue from school time. haha)
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:52:00 AM
Go for it, Andrea, I don't think she's after the smell of Donuts or baby's diapers x
Date: 2/20/2018 12:45:00 PM
Wonderful write, Viv , you did this form so well. You made remember the smell of crayons taken them out to color. luck in the contest Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:52:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I do like nostalgia. Viv x
Date: 2/19/2018 5:03:00 PM
Great storytelling, Viv - and I know exactly what you mean. I find that smells often trigger vivid memories.
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:53:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, all of the senses can bring such rich pickings, can't they ? Viv x
Date: 2/19/2018 12:55:00 PM
Warm wax - what an original take on nostalgic reminiscing. Wonderfully executed and delivered, Viv.
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:53:00 AM
Thanks, Line, I should wish for power cuts more often. Regards, Viv
Date: 2/19/2018 8:54:00 AM
Masterfully renedered memory! It was a pleasure to read this one Viv.
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:54:00 AM
Thanks, Richard, a pleasure to recount. Regards, Viv
Date: 2/19/2018 1:31:00 AM
Brings back my own memories this! Thus a great write.
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:54:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, such a long time ago and so precious. Regards, Viv
Date: 2/19/2018 1:24:00 AM
- A lovely memory in the light of candles, Viv - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:55:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, yes, special times. Viv x

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