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Scavenger of Death

To bid farewell to you was life's cruel pun
while love remains so deep within my heart,
unending, as flames of fire in the sun.
Death, the dark scavenger, tore us apart.

     Without my hand in yours, moonlight grew dull, 
     facets of stars lost their glitter and fell.
     More lonesome than cries of a lone seagull
     is my soul when I weep, "Love, death did quell."

          Heavenly forms hold meaning for others,
          those who soar to greatest height on love's wings.
          But I am bereft. Loneliness smothers
          when I recall sharing those wondrous things.

               To be yours once more would brighten the moon
               Of love and life, both were slain much too soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 5:36 AM
A sonnet that stirs the mind and the heart my friend. Exceptional verses and smooth flow presenting the depths of a great loss.... VERY INSPIRING...
Warrior Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 2:00 PM
I see your alive and well in the sonnet business my Lady Lin...I'll take 1/2 dozen lol...god bless...^WW^
Lane Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 2:49 PM
You're so sweet. You may have a Baker's Dozen. Thanks a lot, WW.
Haight Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Such a lovely, flowing Sonnet, Lin. But so sad and full of heartache. Very touching...Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra.
Quigley Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 8:54 PM
Wow. Sad, beautiful, nicely fluid. Great sonnet.
Lane Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Thank you very much, Tom.
Turner Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Beautifully sad. I'm a sucker for good sonnet and this is one. Great write, Peaches:)
Lane Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Thanks a lot, Danny.
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