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To bid farewell to you was life's cruel pun while love remains so deep within my heart, unending, as flames of fire in the sun. Death, the dark scavenger, tore us apart. Without my hand in yours, moonlight grew dull, facets of stars lost their glitter and fell. More lonesome than cries of a lone seagull is my soul when I weep, "Love, death did quell." Heavenly forms hold meaning for others, those who soar to greatest height on love's wings. But I am bereft. Loneliness smothers when I recall sharing those wondrous things. To be yours once more would brighten the moon Of love and life, both were slain much too soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/22/2016 5:36:00 AM
A sonnet that stirs the mind and the heart my friend. Exceptional verses and smooth flow presenting the depths of a great loss.... VERY INSPIRING...
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Date: 3/22/2016 2:00:00 PM
I see your alive and well in the sonnet business my Lady Lin...I'll take 1/2 dozen lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 3/22/2016 2:49:00 PM
You're so sweet. You may have a Baker's Dozen. Thanks a lot, WW.
Date: 3/20/2016 4:42:00 PM
Such a lovely, flowing Sonnet, Lin. But so sad and full of heartache. Very touching...Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/20/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra.
Date: 3/19/2016 8:54:00 PM
Wow. Sad, beautiful, nicely fluid. Great sonnet.
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Date: 3/20/2016 10:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom.
Date: 3/19/2016 3:09:00 PM
Beautifully sad. I'm a sucker for good sonnet and this is one. Great write, Peaches:)
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Date: 3/20/2016 10:48:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Danny.

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