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Scars Left Behind

You were always honest unfortunately it didn't extend to yourself Regal persona was never exceeded by your accomplishments If only you were as important as you thought others thought you were Some bring joy when they enter a room no one would ever accuse you of that Leaving was always the best gift you could offer Being you could not have been easy No friends to speak of accept one maybe not even him I think he froze in your shadow He has begun to thaw in your absence Strangely I miss you Not entirely sure why Do I in some weird way owe you for my success? Without you I would not have been born You are gone Certainly not forgotten The scars are my reminder A multitude of memories mark my soul Not your typical father son fare Norman Rockwell wouldn't paint our picture I wish I could remember happier times some wishes don't come true Eventually our nightmare came to an end You gave us the gift of leaving Am I evil for being Thankful? You died alone Should I have flown to be by your side? Perhaps Somehow it seems fitting you parted in this way If I had come I may not have been able to hide my relief Now we both have rest Scars Left Behind Contest By: Richard Lamoureux

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Date: 9/2/2014 9:03:00 PM
Oh my goodness Richard. We have a lot of commonalities in our experiences and I think that is why your writes touch me so deeply, I can feel and empathize with them. A million hugs my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2014 9:41:00 PM
I gladly accept each one of them.
Date: 1/28/2014 9:52:00 AM
There is a lot of good that became of this relationship whether you see it or not. The good is that it shaped you into the man you are today. You had to go through it. There was no other way. You must be able to forgive in order to be forgiven. We are all sinners. Part of him will always be in you. I loved reading this.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/28/2014 8:23:00 PM
Absolutely, God gave me many gifts as a result of these experiences.
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Roger Horsch
Date: 1/28/2014 9:56:00 AM
Put on another mans clothes then cry for his soul.
Date: 2/7/2013 10:55:00 AM
Richard, Congratulations on your heartfelt winning poem...always~ LINDA
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2013 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 2/7/2013 10:15:00 AM
Belated Conrats on your top spot Richard xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2013 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Mandy
Date: 2/7/2013 12:34:00 AM
Brilliant piece,excellent write,my friend.Love this wonderful piece.KUDOS! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2013 2:27:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 2/6/2013 6:51:00 PM
Wow, I hear you, you want to be the person YOU want to be! Not colored by their negativity but boy is it hard! My Missing Mother was on a similiar theme. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2013 6:56:00 PM
Sorry to hear that Debbie, no one should have to go through that.
Date: 2/6/2013 12:42:00 AM
....disturbing...but a good write,Richard,,Congrats...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2013 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Mehnaz
Date: 2/5/2013 6:04:00 PM
Richard...when I read the first lines I assumed you were talking about an ex-wife or lover, then wham!...it was your father!...That blew me away...a stunning and compelling piece of work, sir and congratulations - Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2013 7:14:00 PM
Thanks Tim
Date: 12/1/2012 6:35:00 PM
Oh...One of those father son relationships hey? It saddens me to know that you had to go thru that.But a very nice man came thru that sadness.May you be blessed...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2012 7:24:00 PM
Thanks Dan, that is a very nice thing for you to say. No regrets all experiences bring us to where we are. I ended up in a very good spot, loved and loving!
Date: 11/30/2012 10:24:00 PM
Wow, what a powerful power. An expression of the soul that shouldn't be bottled up. Now the person within the poem can rest and move on. Great write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2012 10:32:00 PM
Thanks Jon, I feel well rested, channeling an experience from a long time ago. I have no regrets, thankful for where life has brought me.
Date: 11/30/2012 9:45:00 PM
Pungent write that upsets the heart and stirs the soul.....big hug Rick xo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2012 10:02:00 PM
Thanks, alway glad to have a hug. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 11/30/2012 6:55:00 PM
Wow, this is a powerful write my friend! I am enamored by the brilliance of your words within this poem! By the way I have entered your contest already, I hope you like what I have entered! Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2012 7:42:00 PM
Thanks for being one of the first to try out my Questionku. I left you a soup mail message.

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