Scars

She ran her fingers across my skin,
counting my scars as if they were legal tender. 
I thought about the moment when skin
breaks apart, when life has a chance 
to escape its cage.
I think she could see it in my eyes,
because her touch became a violent rush,
her nails hungry for the burst of 
what was wrought between us. 
And so, I bled for her;
Staining her hunger with the rage of scars 
she couldn’t see. 
-James Kelley 2014, All rights reserved.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Duncan Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:14 AM
Would I be right in saying all your writing are in metaphors. I like the way you take the reader on your path :) you have a grand day James !
Kelley Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Yes, I do like to weave metaphor in nearly everything I write...thank you for coming along on my journey Debbie.. peace
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