Scarlett

Crimson fingernails pull back the curtain,
her pale skin blending into the sheerness of it.
She was never as close to him as she was tonight.
The blood moon glow of her eyes knew him well,
though not a word was spoken between them,
nor did he know her name.... Scarlett.

The white wisps of fog that made up her dress,
skate along the floor then hover just above him,
her body never touching his except for
one cheek pressed against his warm chest.
His slow and steady heartbeat resounding
in her ears as he dreams in peace.

Tiny fangs protrude from behind red lips
as she leans in close, no pain will he feel
for her bite is whisper soft like a mosquito's,
her breath like a tickle of it's fluttering wings,
so as not to awaken.... not just yet.

Contented with the smallest stain 
of maroon on her mouth, she vanishes 
back into the night from which she came,
knowing the blood moon glow 
of her eyes shall see him again.
One day he would know her name.... Scarlett.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gasun Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 5:49 PM
I'm so compelled to read this incredible suspense story poem of yours my dear friend Kelly. Looking forward for the sequel. Congratulations on your win and this outstanding write. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings my dear friend. Hugs
Deschler Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 7:13 PM
Thank you Len ... Glad you enjoyed it ... I wrote a sequel to this story a few years ago and never got around to posting it. I will have to find that poem and share it :)
Delaney Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 5:57 AM
When will he awaken to discover? Looking forward to the sequel, Kelly: Excellent suspense and Congratulatiions. on Your win. SuZ
Deschler Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 10:12 AM
Thank you Suzanne ... I had written a sequel a few years ago and for some reason, never posted it... I will have to find it again and share it :)
Canerdy Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:45 PM
Kelly, you have so effectively described how lust and evil combined can wreak havoc. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Deschler Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Janice
Inman Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Hi Kelly this is an exceptional write, darkness, mystery and passion wrapped in a beautiful veil of imagery.
Deschler Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Thank you so much, James ... I really appreciate your kind comments about this poem :)
Nusker Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 10:06 PM
This is absolutely amazing and very entertaining. Simply love it.
Deschler Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 7:08 PM
Thank you once again, Afzal. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this one :)
George   Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Wow....so dramatic. what a picture you paint with this haunting story, Kelly. I enjoyed it very much. Elaine
Deschler Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 6:06 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem, Elaine. Its become one of my favorite poems that I've written so far :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 9:47 PM
A dark yet very beautiful piece. I hope you do write a sequel Kelly. This was enchanting! #7
Deschler Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:38 PM
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment, Connie. All I can say is thank you!... I did write a sequel to this poem and was going to post it. Somehow it got pushed to the side, but now that I have more time I will be posting that sequel very soon.
Makama Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 8:36 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
Deschler Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 11:05 PM
Each of your kind comments is much appreciated, Funom. It feels good to know that you are enjoying my poems and are wanting to come by time and again to read more. All I can say is thank you :)
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 6:54 PM
KELLY, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Deschler Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 6:40 PM
Thank you so much, SKAT... Hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Wishing you and your family all the best for 2016! :)
Scars Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 1:46 PM
*love* #7 great poem! -LU xxx
Deschler Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 9:14 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. I appreciate it! :)
Muideen Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 11:48 AM
what a great and extreme excellent write my friend...........A.M
Deschler Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Thank you so very much, AM. I appreciate your kind comments on this poem :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 9:04 AM
hauntingly mysterious like the howling kiss of moonlight... love the many facets of scarlet, kelly... starkly beautiful!..huggs
Deschler Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 10:41 PM
Thank you, Nette. I really appreciate your kind comments, as always :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 9:05 AM
sweet congrats!
Lindley Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 4:48 PM
A exquisitely soft and smoothly written dark write! Thats quite an accomplishment my friend.A7
Deschler Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 10:07 PM
I really appreciate your kind comments on this poem, my friend.Thank you so very much :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 3:18 PM
wowowow, this is really quite a poem. Gone with the Wind meets Twilight or something. I really like this, Kelly!!!
Deschler Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:56 PM
I'm so glad you did, Andrea! Thank you so much... It was fun to write a dark/fantasy kind of story like this. I am thinking about continuing it with a sequel or two :)
Devnath  Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Excellent Scarlett beauty of the hue of the Sky's face. Neat and clean 7, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Deschler Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 1:21 AM
I really appreciate your nice comments and the 7 rating. Thank you, BL!
Guzzi Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 6:51 PM
ohhh very lovely & haunting! Light & Love
Deschler Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:12 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Debbie :)
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Very dark, but so well-written, Kelly. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Deschler Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:08 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. I appreciate your nice comments! Hugs :)
A  Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Kelly, Congrats on your any poem win. SKAT <3
Deschler Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:01 PM
Thank you so very much, Skat :)
Allison Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 2:40 AM
Wow Kelly would love to see a follow on poem - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Deschler Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 6:58 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! ...I am working on a sequel to this poem and hope to post it soon :)
A. Sharma Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 12:22 AM
Congrats on your superb first place win with this lovely write Kelly!
Deschler Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma!
A   Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 11:45 PM
Nice to see you on my contest list. Thank you, Kelly. Congrats on the win. Enjoy my newest blog "One More Thing" if you'd like. Always ~LINDA~
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 1:09 PM
- Scarlett can fit perfectly for Halloween, dear Kelly :) - A great and really well written poem - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 11:30 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. It is fun to write this type of poem, especially as Halloween was drawing near... Hope you are enjoying your weekend! Hugs :)
Austin Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 11:31 AM
Sexy. Something about vampire doings has always turned people on. This poem is a jewel. Love, daver
Deschler Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daver... There has always been an attraction to vampires since they began appearing in books and movies, and I don't think that will stop anytime soon :)
Horsman Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 5:51 PM
Oh yes 'true blood' in poetry, this is amazing Kelly
Deschler Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Thank you so much, Harry... Its fun to write a story like this, especially as Halloween draws near :)
Callus Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Excellent, Kelly!! You are at your best when writing dark and mysterious. You had me there with you, enjoying the thrill, right to the moment of retreat....and a promise of more to come. #7 ~ Warm regards. // paul
Deschler Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Thank you so very much, Paul. I am happy that you enjoyed this and my other dark writes, as well... I am writing a sequel and possibly a third chapter to her story. :)
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