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Scarlett

Crimson fingernails pull back the curtain, her pale skin blending into the sheerness of it. She was never as close to him as she was tonight. The blood moon glow of her eyes knew him well, though not a word was spoken between them, nor did he know her name.... Scarlett. The white wisps of fog that made up her dress, skate along the floor then hover just above him, her body never touching his except for one cheek pressed against his warm chest. His slow and steady heartbeat resounding in her ears as he dreams in peace. Tiny fangs protrude from behind red lips as she leans in close, no pain will he feel for her bite is whisper soft like a mosquito's, her breath like a tickle of it's fluttering wings, so as not to awaken.... not just yet. Contented with the smallest stain of maroon on her mouth, she vanishes back into the night from which she came, knowing the blood moon glow of her eyes shall see him again. One day he would know her name.... Scarlett.

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Date: 10/10/2022 5:49:00 PM
I'm so compelled to read this incredible suspense story poem of yours my dear friend Kelly. Looking forward for the sequel. Congratulations on your win and this outstanding write. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings my dear friend. Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/22/2022 7:13:00 PM
Thank you Len ... Glad you enjoyed it ... I wrote a sequel to this story a few years ago and never got around to posting it. I will have to find that poem and share it :)
Date: 10/6/2022 7:12:00 PM
Anne Rice could pick up a few tips from this piece. I scan through a lot of poems on this site (and started to just scan this one) but this one sucked me in… no pun intended. I read it a couple of times. This is very good Kelly. I see that its been around a few years but has aged well. Impressive writing.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/22/2022 7:02:00 PM
Hi Mark, I just wanted to let you know that I have tried several times to leave a comment on your poem, 'Midnight Rose', but was unsuccessful ... I have contacted Poetry Soup about this issue and they are trying to resolve it.
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Date: 10/21/2022 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Mark ... Glad you enjoyed it ... I'm an admirer of female horror writers, including Anne Rice, and to be compared to her is quite a compliment. I'm flattered!
Date: 10/6/2022 5:57:00 AM
When will he awaken to discover? Looking forward to the sequel, Kelly: Excellent suspense and Congratulatiions. on Your win. SuZ
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Date: 10/21/2022 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne ... I had written a sequel a few years ago and for some reason, never posted it... I will have to find it again and share it :)
Date: 10/4/2022 9:45:00 PM
Kelly, you have so effectively described how lust and evil combined can wreak havoc. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/18/2022 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Janice
Date: 2/22/2018 7:04:00 AM
Hi Kelly this is an exceptional write, darkness, mystery and passion wrapped in a beautiful veil of imagery.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/1/2018 7:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, James ... I really appreciate your kind comments about this poem :)
Date: 2/27/2017 10:06:00 PM
This is absolutely amazing and very entertaining. Simply love it.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/9/2017 7:08:00 PM
Thank you once again, Afzal. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this one :)
Date: 2/8/2016 5:03:00 PM
Wow....so dramatic. what a picture you paint with this haunting story, Kelly. I enjoyed it very much. Elaine
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/19/2016 6:06:00 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem, Elaine. Its become one of my favorite poems that I've written so far :)
Date: 2/6/2016 9:47:00 PM
A dark yet very beautiful piece. I hope you do write a sequel Kelly. This was enchanting! #7
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:38:00 PM
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment, Connie. All I can say is thank you!... I did write a sequel to this poem and was going to post it. Somehow it got pushed to the side, but now that I have more time I will be posting that sequel very soon.
Date: 2/6/2016 8:36:00 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/13/2016 11:05:00 PM
Each of your kind comments is much appreciated, Funom. It feels good to know that you are enjoying my poems and are wanting to come by time and again to read more. All I can say is thank you :)
Date: 12/20/2015 6:54:00 PM
KELLY, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/14/2016 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, SKAT... Hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Wishing you and your family all the best for 2016! :)
Date: 11/17/2015 1:46:00 PM
*love* #7 great poem! -LU xxx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/8/2015 9:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. I appreciate it! :)
Date: 11/8/2015 11:48:00 AM
what a great and extreme excellent write my friend...........A.M
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/20/2015 10:49:00 PM
Thank you so very much, AM. I appreciate your kind comments on this poem :)
Date: 11/8/2015 9:04:00 AM
hauntingly mysterious like the howling kiss of moonlight... love the many facets of scarlet, kelly... starkly beautiful!..huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/20/2015 10:41:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. I really appreciate your kind comments, as always :)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 11/8/2015 9:05:00 AM
sweet congrats!
Date: 11/7/2015 4:48:00 PM
A exquisitely soft and smoothly written dark write! Thats quite an accomplishment my friend.A7
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/19/2015 10:07:00 PM
I really appreciate your kind comments on this poem, my friend.Thank you so very much :)
Date: 11/6/2015 3:18:00 PM
wowowow, this is really quite a poem. Gone with the Wind meets Twilight or something. I really like this, Kelly!!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/19/2015 9:56:00 PM
I'm so glad you did, Andrea! Thank you so much... It was fun to write a dark/fantasy kind of story like this. I am thinking about continuing it with a sequel or two :)
Date: 11/5/2015 10:23:00 AM
Excellent Scarlett beauty of the hue of the Sky's face. Neat and clean 7, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/16/2015 1:21:00 AM
I really appreciate your nice comments and the 7 rating. Thank you, BL!
Date: 11/3/2015 6:51:00 PM
ohhh very lovely & haunting! Light & Love
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/13/2015 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Debbie :)
Date: 11/3/2015 6:30:00 PM
Very dark, but so well-written, Kelly. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/13/2015 7:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. I appreciate your nice comments! Hugs :)
Date: 11/3/2015 12:36:00 PM
Kelly, Congrats on your any poem win. SKAT <3
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/13/2015 7:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Skat :)
Date: 11/3/2015 2:40:00 AM
Wow Kelly would love to see a follow on poem - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/13/2015 6:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! ...I am working on a sequel to this poem and hope to post it soon :)
Date: 11/3/2015 12:22:00 AM
Congrats on your superb first place win with this lovely write Kelly!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/13/2015 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma!
Date: 11/2/2015 11:45:00 PM
Nice to see you on my contest list. Thank you, Kelly. Congrats on the win. Enjoy my newest blog "One More Thing" if you'd like. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/30/2015 1:09:00 PM
- Scarlett can fit perfectly for Halloween, dear Kelly :) - A great and really well written poem - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/7/2015 11:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. It is fun to write this type of poem, especially as Halloween was drawing near... Hope you are enjoying your weekend! Hugs :)
Date: 10/27/2015 11:31:00 AM
Sexy. Something about vampire doings has always turned people on. This poem is a jewel. Love, daver
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/5/2015 10:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daver... There has always been an attraction to vampires since they began appearing in books and movies, and I don't think that will stop anytime soon :)
Date: 10/24/2015 5:51:00 PM
Oh yes 'true blood' in poetry, this is amazing Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/26/2015 10:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Harry... Its fun to write a story like this, especially as Halloween draws near :)
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