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Scarlet Umbrella

The tempting thought I just could not dismiss To share with you one surreptitious kiss. A brief, flirtatious moment of delight, Snatched furtively and hidden out of sight. The red umbrella camouflaged all shame As if accomplice to our fickle game. But passion soon subsided, like the rain And guilty eyes could not engage again. * You left me standing there and it was clear That we could not betray those we held dear. I gazed into the scarlet dome above Ashamed that I had risked true, steadfast love. And looking down, my faithful dog sat there. His saddened gaze was more than I could bear. I led him home resolved upon that day, No more to linger in temptation’s sway. Then, one by one the features disappeared, I glanced outside, the stormy skies had cleared. 'Ah, there you are, I thought I'd find you here, The gallery is closing soon, my dear!' A painting, like a poem can inspire Rekindling the imagination’s fire. And both may leave a message in their trail, For contemplative spirits to unveil. 31/10/18 ‘The red umbrella poetry contest‘ - Sponsored by: Eve Roper * Please note that in Britain and according to the Oxford dictionary, two versions of the pronunciation of 'again' are permitted and commonly in use. One rhymes with 'men' and one with ' rain'.I have used the second version here. Audio version at : https://dictionary.cambridge.org/pronunciation/english/again

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Date: 11/30/2018 12:28:00 PM
Beautifully written, Wendy. Congrats.
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Date: 11/19/2018 6:08:00 PM
I enjoyed your 'outside the box' take on the theme, Wendy! Well-done, and congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/17/2018 1:07:00 PM
such beautiful rhyme Wendy:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:38:00 AM
- A lovely winning poem :) - Congratulations, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2018 11:01:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Wendy, you had everything I was looking for. Great flow, rhyme and subject matter . Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/8/2018 12:33:00 PM
Beautiful poem - I had not read yours till now and love the complexity and imagery.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 11/12/2018 4:39:00 PM
What a kind comment,Mark. There are some great entries in this contest.
Date: 11/5/2018 6:10:00 PM
I loved the way you used the rhyme interpret your poem. My compliments!!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 11/12/2018 4:41:00 PM
Thank you,Ralph. I really enjoyed your version too.
Date: 11/3/2018 3:25:00 PM
Oh, this is lovely. You’ve written a story set to music with this poem; containing a struggle with temptation, resolution and a beautiful moral. Really well done. My best. Deb
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Wendy Watson
Date: 11/4/2018 9:45:00 AM
What kind comments,Deb.From those I've read so far mine seems to be the only one with little romantic flavour but at least it ends on a positive note!
Date: 11/2/2018 3:20:00 AM
Like Carolyn I'm enjoying everyone's interpretation of the picture, saw the little dog but didn't use it anyway it was a stray lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 11/4/2018 9:40:00 AM
Oh yours was wonderful, Tom. Must have been such a disappointing wake-up call!
Date: 11/1/2018 5:35:00 PM
It's wonderful to see all of the different interpretations of the picture. Your poem is beautifully rhymed and stirs sympathy in the reader's heart. Faithfulness is often challenged, so it's best not "to linger in temptation’s sway." Nice work! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Wendy Watson
Date: 11/4/2018 9:35:00 AM
What lovely comments, Carolyn. Thank you, though having read all the other romantic 'offerings' I feel a bit of a spoilsport!

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