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Fearfully scared of truth on bottomless pit awaiting me with its enclosing darkness, forever unlit --- my soul succumbed to confession of nervousness whit especially that I was guilty of iniquity’s blowing hit… grateful to God for His compassion declared by holy writ I clung to Him by faith; cleaved to His offered grace to make me spiritually fit. Horrified by frightening wrath of terrifying hell* along awful worms that die not in the lake of fire as well surpassing eerie Halloween shows with unnerving bell --- my heart, at first skeptic, admitted shock for eternal torment’s swell I trusted the Lord for reaching me so in heaven I can dwell… now, His love I gladly share; His warning, I’m not scared to tell.
*Revelation 20:14 And death and hell were cast into the lake of fire. This is the second death. October 13, 2020 2nd place, "Halloween Fright" Contest Sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire; judged on 10/15/2020.

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Date: 10/16/2020 10:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Halloween poem, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/15/2020 12:21:00 PM
I like this a lot Beata. A different take. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/15/2020 10:49:00 AM
Faith can protect us from fear, Beata. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 10/14/2020 3:54:00 PM
Massive roller coaster of emotions. Loads of atmosphere in its message. Excellent!
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Date: 10/13/2020 9:17:00 PM
Fear of Hell all should fear. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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