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Saying Things Simply

The words shift over When the heart grieves with mistrust And life seems complex with her Saying things simply Can prevent splaying of pain Increased by those staring eyes Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/7/2017 8:29:00 AM
Potent little piece Russel, my favourite kind of poetry :) lovely to read you xomo
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Date: 9/7/2017 7:27:00 AM
Wonderfully powerful and elegant my friend, Russell! Much enjoyed my friend! Hope you are better! Just posted for today!
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Date: 9/7/2017 6:07:00 AM
Indeed! A gorgeous Sedoka with so much wisdom and understanding within ... truly enjoyed this read, Russell, and I thank you so much for starting my day on such a good note! Blessings! :-)
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Date: 9/6/2017 6:00:00 PM
very nice, Russell. I enjoy seeing your new poetry!
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Date: 9/6/2017 2:34:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Very descriptive about the eyes..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/6/2017 2:31:00 PM
Definitely keep it simple russell;-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/6/2017 1:46:00 PM
Lovely Sedoka--Love the line--saying things simply--a job well done Russell!
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Date: 9/6/2017 7:56:00 AM
Ah ha the old Kiss Principle. It is so easy to slip into complexity if you do not know your self first.
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Date: 9/6/2017 7:14:00 AM
- Saying things simply, Russell ... that's me :))) - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2017 6:00:00 AM
Wow What a poem Russell. Great one! I can relate to this one :)
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