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Say Goodbye

Syllables of starlight pierce the page, comets of punctuation dance on lines; Black holes swallow thoughts that are better left to die; Galaxies are born from your modesty; Some smiles grow brighter in the dark, drunk on the warmth of celestial brandy; One sip and you can fly; Poetic phrases orbit the Earth keeping our feelings in motion; They come with gravitational pull, escape but you cannot say goodbye; One sip and you can fly, escape but can never really say goodbye.

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Date: 9/4/2023 7:07:00 PM
Love your poem, takes the mind into captivity through the galaxies: )
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 9/4/2023 7:20:00 PM
Thank you.

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