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Savoir-Faire of the Great Bear

If you should hear him coming, fear his roar His grizzled warnings, you should not ignore A formidable champion is Ursus, a carnivore His claws protects those he loves with vigour He confidently stands on two powerful legs to liberate the world from its deviant dregs Quite beastly is his gnarly savoir-faire attitude when in combat with the insolent and the rude He'd prefer to live in harmony with c'est la vie, thinking, That's life and what will be will be But he will fight when needed... c'est la guerre Off to war with courage, strides the Great Bear With one arm held in check, he'll not be denied the voice to rebuke those who abuse and deride If blinded in one eye, he would never hold back To defend those in need he would bravely attack

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/4/2018 7:18:00 AM

Hi Lin, a tribute that I know shall be much deserved for whomever it was written for. The strength and the heart of the bear is second to none, such a strong metaphor. I love the content of this write. The power held within the words. Once again you place before us a wonderful piece. May your words ever grace the Soup. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lin Lane
Date: 11/6/2018 10:10:00 AM

Thank you so very much for leaving such encouraging and insightful remarks, Mike.

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/3/2018 7:28:00 AM

Did I you write this as a metaphor for your protector or our service men and women? Either way, very well done my ,dear...

Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2018 10:15:00 AM

I had a friend in mind when these thoughts came to me. Thanks, dear man.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/1/2018 8:27:00 AM

Brilliantly crafted poetry as always my dear friend. Whomever this person is, I must say I truly like him. Those that attack others and live upon the misery they cause are hideous beasts walking in human form. Great poem, a fav..

Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2018 6:58:00 PM

He's quite worthy of the lines I've written about his character. Thanks for the read and thoughtful comments, Robert.

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/31/2018 12:31:00 AM

loved it Lin. ...Seren

Lin Lane
Date: 10/31/2018 6:49:00 AM

Thanks so much, Seren.

John Gondolf

Date: 10/30/2018 4:36:00 PM

The Great Bear is magnificent from afar but one must always keep their distance lest they be taken down. Nicely written, Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/31/2018 6:49:00 AM

Thank you, but the bear of whom I write can also be of the teddy type...soft and cuddly when his ears are scratched.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/30/2018 8:24:00 AM

Reading this poem I thought of Russia which is described as a great Bear. The Great Bear stood strong in World War Two and helped turn the tide against The Nazi invaders. I enjoyed this poem.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/30/2018 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, Rick. It seems Russia can still wear the name, but not as a friend. Thanks for the read and leaving your comment.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/30/2018 7:40:00 AM

Lovely verse Lin, I see from the comments it could be a person and if that's the case then there is no one better to have at your side. Before I started reading it the bear in the revanant came to mind . Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 10/30/2018 7:55:00 AM

Oh, Tom! The scene of the bear attack in that movie was gruesome, and yet it held me spellbound. I knew he'd attack again and I sat there, cringing. The ferocity of such a wild beast is frightening, but having a great bear on your side is an honor. Thanks so much for your welcomed remarks.

Darren White

Date: 10/30/2018 1:06:00 AM

Lin, this is a wonderful tribute, and so well written! I love it, and I am sure he will too :)

Lin Lane
Date: 10/30/2018 5:00:00 AM

Hi, Darren. Thanks for adding your kind comments to the others. They're always appreciated.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/29/2018 8:47:00 PM

whoever this lad is, I am sure he is smiling ear to ear! Tim took the words from my mouth! Beautiful poem.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/30/2018 5:00:00 AM

Thanks very much, Arthur. He knew this was aimed in his direction and has charmingly responded.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/29/2018 6:50:00 PM

A wonderful ode Lin, you have a great heart.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/30/2018 4:54:00 AM

Thank you for such a sweet comment, Tim. I really appreciate your thoughts.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/29/2018 4:10:00 PM

Not sure if its metaphorical or not Lin but whatever the case I'd want him on my side:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2018 5:02:00 PM

I think you have no need to fear, Jan. His growls are not meant for everyone.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/29/2018 3:48:00 PM

The bear necessity of poetry lol...strong write Laney...love & light...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2018 5:00:00 PM

Thanks, WW. Strong words to characterize friend or foe.

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/29/2018 3:27:00 PM

I have these creatures from a distance...certainly won't play around there...A nice write on the Great Bear...All the best Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2018 4:56:00 PM

Thanks, Arturo. An awesome creature, for sure.

Chris Green

Date: 10/29/2018 2:45:00 PM

This was wonderful Lin. I am not sure if the bear in your poem is a metaphor for a person living today so I will take it as I read it and say it is a magnificent poem as is the grizzly bear which in my opinion is one of the most majestic and dangerous animals on the planet.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2018 4:55:00 PM

The bear can be many things to many people. I agree with your assessment of a bear, Chris, and thanks for the compliment.