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Savior

Maturity. That’s his name. Clad in tatters but armored in time, He ripped me from the claws of a death That had already composed the funeral hymn For me. He found me torn and dying In a labor theater giving life To something I didn’t quite know: Something that had to replace the void That one fateful night had left: Something that could have been revenge. He took its place and came into my life, On a night of odds and spades. He picked me up from the ditches of mortality And embarked me on a road to everywhere. He showed me that pain was endless But that it always moved in pairs with joy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/24/2025 11:59:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/23/2016 10:21:00 PM
JACQUELINE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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