Save This Soul

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Save this soul from being burned,
whenever your eyes glare at me.
Take me out from this room,
where fire melts my whole body.

Bring my soul somewhere else,
where I can lay down in serenity.
Save me from this sullen pain,
cure this wound in my flesh.

Please send my soul into bliss,
For I don't know where to turn.
I'm a lost soul finding my way,
Send me home where I can rest.

In peaceful night ,in a quiet place.
Save my soul from being blazed.
Shield me in your arms,then promise.
You wouldn't  leave 'til we meet the sunset.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/7/2021 12:59:00 AM
Well penned piece Aiyah, the beauty of sunset has its effect!
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Date: 2/19/2017 10:21:00 PM
Beautiful. Like a plea for guidance to help lift the weary to a place of peace. I love this, wonderfully penned.:-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/1/2015 9:55:00 AM
where do you want to go....you just need to follow the flow....of your own beating heart....it will show you the best place to start....;)
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Date: 7/20/2015 5:09:00 AM
lovely one to read to assuage a bittersweet existence. u can see my visual art on tumblr.com under daniel schack/dan's world. enjoy.
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Date: 6/4/2015 10:52:00 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:46:00 PM
Aiyah, this such a beautiful heartfelt poem, I loved it and the flow of the poem! A7 for me!
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Date: 5/21/2015 1:33:00 PM
- Really wonderful writing, it's almost like a prayer - I hope all is well with you, dear Aiyah !!!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/20/2015 1:51:00 PM
oh my, so well put together, aya... captive words bring out the sense of longing... greeat write!.. huggs
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Date: 5/20/2015 6:47:00 AM
Excellent write, just a little time Aiyah he will send you to where you will have halcyon day for your life, well penned........);Afolabi.
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