Aiyah Torres Poet Blank verse

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Save This Soul

Save this soul from being burned,
whenever your eyes glare at me.
Take me out from this room,
where fire melts my whole body.

Bring my soul somewhere else,
where I can lay down in serenity.
Save me from this sullen pain,
cure this wound in my flesh.

Please send my soul into bliss,
For I don't know where to turn.
I'm a lost soul finding my way,
Send me home where I can rest.

In peaceful night ,in a quiet place.
Save my soul from being blazed.
Shield me in your arms,then promise.
You wouldn't  leave 'til we meet the sunset.

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Gordon Mcconnell July 7, 2021 at 12:59 AM Well penned piece Aiyah, the beauty of sunset has its effect!

Lynn Marie February 19, 2017 at 10:21 PM Beautiful. Like a plea for guidance to help lift the weary to a place of peace. I love this, wonderfully penned.:-) blessings, lynn

Eric Boddie August 1, 2015 at 9:55 AM where do you want to go....you just need to follow the flow....of your own beating heart....it will show you the best place to start....;)

Daniel Schack July 20, 2015 at 5:09 AM lovely one to read to assuage a bittersweet existence. u can see my visual art on tumblr.com under daniel schack/dan's world. enjoy.

Funom Makama June 4, 2015 at 10:52 AM What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Arthur Vaso May 25, 2015 at 2:46 PM Aiyah, this such a beautiful heartfelt poem, I loved it and the flow of the poem! A7 for me!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2015 at 1:33 PM - Really wonderful writing, it's almost like a prayer - I hope all is well with you, dear Aiyah !!!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud May 20, 2015 at 1:51 PM oh my, so well put together, aya... captive words bring out the sense of longing... greeat write!.. huggs

Afolabi Muideen May 20, 2015 at 6:47 AM Excellent write, just a little time Aiyah he will send you to where you will have halcyon day for your life, well penned........);Afolabi.