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Save Me Part 1 Part 2 _____ _____ The dark is all I see - Somehow suddenly It's getting hard to breathe You come to me and I'm suffering Can I believe Why won't somebody - That you can help me Come and comfort me Teach me to break free and help me break free Or simply comfort me I'm so broken - I'm hoping that you might Been forgotten Help me find the light Why do I feel nothing? So I'll be alright No one sees me - Now I finally see Sinking slowly It feels so good to breathe All my love wastes away and I'm finally happy

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Date: 6/7/2017 1:20:00 PM
- New to Poetry Soup ... Welcome and thanks for your first great poem, Alden :) - // Sun :)
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Date: 6/5/2017 1:52:00 AM
Oh, I like how you formatted your poem, that is a lot of work! it so wondefully puts the two poems opposite each other, in meaning also. Starts sad, and ends so hopeful. Beautifully done, welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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