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SAUDADE His pulse quickens brandy-like breath pinkroot cheeks wild rose eyes aflame trancelike, he grasps the sides of his easy chair and downs another gulp he reaches for air bare-naked air with long brunette hair he whispers for her begging between walls of teeth he sees her twirling laugh and castanets clapping and howling his palms hold the sides of his face, his ears the warm parts of him jitter in response, tears mock her lashes bat against curvy brows her long dress sweeps against the stage he falls to his knees screaming out her name the silence of the room a net that holds him prisoner he falls at her feet kisses the moonlit ghost an untouchable feast 1/31/2019 Sponsor Edward Ibeh

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Date: 2/25/2019 4:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2019 4:35:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 2/24/2019 9:49:00 PM
Wonderful use of detail to nails down the sadness with loss in this Saudade, Kim, enjoyed the read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2019 10:09:00 PM
Thank you, Sheri!
Date: 2/24/2019 2:20:00 PM
wow, so much vivid imagery, Kim. It's fresh with imagery! Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2019 2:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Hugs...Kim
Date: 2/24/2019 12:58:00 PM
- This is deep touching, an awsome writing Kim - - Congratulations on your 2nd place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2019 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! xx
Date: 2/24/2019 8:45:00 AM
Thanks for taking part in my contest, Kim!:-) Amazing poem with striking imagery! Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2019 12:17:00 PM
Thank you, Edward!
Date: 2/1/2019 3:24:00 PM
So vivid and - immediate, somehow, love the lines 'bare naked air/with long brunette hair' - best of luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2019 10:21:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 2/1/2019 3:08:00 PM
haunting memories , wow this is one powerful poem,,love it...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2019 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Harry!

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