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I will turn back the pages of time To memories of long, long ago that still shine bright It was a brief love . . . Yet, quietly unfolds in my dreams We met in Chiado, Lisbon I was a tourist shopping for books and mementos When I stopped for a coffee And your dark brooding eyes captured me My exquisite Portuguese man Soon we were walking hand in hand in the city architecture You showed me all the sights of Lisbon and hidden beauty We dined on fish from local fishermen, laughing I recall watching Bee-Eating birds with awe I was swept up in your deep voice and strong arms Our lovemaking was unbelievable, truly sublime and blissful Although my memories are breathtaking I feel a deep grief for this love That was too brief and not meant to last forever It did- it lives in my mind and dreams Where I remember us walking the beach at night, touching Oh, often you come drifting to me For this love we had lives forever in me and you In our memories that even when ancient and antique will not fade I cannot fathom that I will ever forget you We both knew we could not be That our love was just a juncture of time, our stage But you are still with me every single day, every moment Those brooding eyes will always haunt me Love only a whisper Can be everlasting and meaningful to the heart Even when wrinkled aged and grey-haired It was long ago and so much has happened But those days of yesterday are treasures found In the bouquet of magical moments collected in my life I am chained happily to this love found years ago ________________________________ January 25, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Saudade Copyright Protected, ID 19-1108-027-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Poem Titled Saudade sponsor, Edward Ibeh First Place

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Date: 2/26/2019 5:21:00 AM
'Dear Heart, Congratulations on your win! Very evocative. Especially liked the phrase "bouquet of magical moments." David'
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Date: 2/25/2019 4:36:00 PM
Well penned, Constance. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 2/24/2019 10:07:00 PM
Wonderful Saudade about your past love, whom you married, it's never quite the same way, Dear Heart, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/24/2019 2:24:00 PM
So far, yours is the only one i see making mention of portugese man!! I love the beautiful way you expressed your sentiments with the two final lines . A wonderful metaphor you used. Congrats on your number one win, my friend.
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Date: 2/24/2019 12:41:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in this contest, D.H. - A wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2019 12:21:00 PM
Nicely done, Constance! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thanks for taking part in my contest, Constance!:-) Loved this. Such a great poem. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 1/25/2019 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic; great imagery; good luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2019 4:42:00 PM
ML, thanks for visiting with the beautiful ~
Date: 1/25/2019 11:29:00 AM
Hi friends, in case you are wondering Chiado, is an area in the city of Lisbon, Portugal known for shopping, coffee shops, museums and theaters, very popular with tourists.
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Bobby May
Date: 1/25/2019 12:23:00 PM
It sounds very nice Dear Heart it gave you your foundation to write your poetry all I have are trees, lol
Date: 1/25/2019 10:14:00 AM
Hurry up the suspense is killing me lol
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Bobby May
Date: 1/25/2019 11:57:00 AM
Phew, that was a long wait, lol this is very romantic my friend what a wonderful vision it's truly a magical poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2019 11:27:00 AM
Bobby thanks for visiting, all finished, please come back !!

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