Saudade

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I will turn back the pages of time
To memories of long, long ago that still shine bright
It was a brief love . . . 
Yet, quietly unfolds in my dreams

We met in Chiado, Lisbon
I was a tourist shopping for books and mementos
When I stopped for a coffee
And your dark brooding eyes captured me

My exquisite Portuguese man
Soon we were walking hand in hand in the city architecture
You showed me all the sights of Lisbon and hidden beauty
We dined on fish from local fishermen, laughing 
I recall watching Bee-Eating birds with awe 

I was swept up in your deep voice and strong arms
Our lovemaking was unbelievable, truly sublime and blissful

Although my memories are breathtaking
I feel a deep grief for this love 
That was too brief and not meant to last forever
It did-  it lives in my mind and dreams
Where I remember us walking the beach at night, touching

Oh, often you come drifting to me
For this love we had lives forever in me and you
In our memories that even when ancient and antique will not fade
I cannot fathom that I will ever forget you

We both knew we could not be
That our love was just a juncture of time, our stage  
But you are still with me every single day, every moment
Those brooding eyes will always haunt me 

Love only a whisper
Can be everlasting and meaningful to the heart
Even when wrinkled aged and grey-haired

It was long ago and so much has happened
But those days of yesterday are treasures found
In the bouquet of magical moments collected in my life
I am chained happily to this love found years ago

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January 25, 2019


Poetry/Free Verse/Saudade
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1108-027-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest,  Poem Titled Saudade
sponsor, Edward Ibeh

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/26/2019 5:21:00 AM
'Dear Heart, Congratulations on your win! Very evocative. Especially liked the phrase "bouquet of magical moments." David'
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Date: 2/25/2019 4:36:00 PM
Well penned, Constance. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 2/24/2019 10:07:00 PM
Wonderful Saudade about your past love, whom you married, it's never quite the same way, Dear Heart, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/24/2019 2:24:00 PM
So far, yours is the only one i see making mention of portugese man!! I love the beautiful way you expressed your sentiments with the two final lines . A wonderful metaphor you used. Congrats on your number one win, my friend.
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Date: 2/24/2019 12:41:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in this contest, D.H. - A wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2019 12:21:00 PM
Nicely done, Constance! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thanks for taking part in my contest, Constance!:-) Loved this. Such a great poem. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 1/25/2019 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic; great imagery; good luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2019 4:42:00 PM
ML, thanks for visiting with the beautiful ~
Date: 1/25/2019 11:29:00 AM
Hi friends, in case you are wondering Chiado, is an area in the city of Lisbon, Portugal known for shopping, coffee shops, museums and theaters, very popular with tourists.
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Bobby May
Date: 1/25/2019 12:23:00 PM
It sounds very nice Dear Heart it gave you your foundation to write your poetry all I have are trees, lol
Date: 1/25/2019 10:14:00 AM
Hurry up the suspense is killing me lol
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Bobby May
Date: 1/25/2019 11:57:00 AM
Phew, that was a long wait, lol this is very romantic my friend what a wonderful vision it's truly a magical poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2019 11:27:00 AM
Bobby thanks for visiting, all finished, please come back !!
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