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Satin Bliss

In satin bliss of vivid hue abides a rose still damp with dew. Upon its stem the pigment bled, infusing petals crimson red, instilling beauty for debut. I blush for such a gift undue and gasp to see its lovely view. This rose expresses words unsaid in satin bliss. This kiss, my dear, I give to you and ev'ry day our souls renew. Two faithful hearts, one mingled thread, place sanguine petals on their bed and dare to do what lovers do in satin bliss.

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John Watt

Date: 3/10/2023 8:17:00 PM

Mark, my respect for your poetic mastery has grown with each marathon mile. I wonder sometimes if you aren't actually a 19th century Romantic who time-traveled 200 years into the future, lol. I marvel at your precision of word choices, original imagery, emotional depth, and rhythmic integrity, and I always second Mark Toney's high esteem of your entries. You are the poet I want to be when I grow up. Sincere congrats for your podium placement, especially in the midst of such amazing talent.

Valsa George

Date: 3/6/2023 8:49:00 PM

Love to be back to your poem of effortless beauty. Your poem and your love shine as a rose of vivid hue. My hearty Congratulations on your prestigious podium win, Mark. I feel it a blessing to have got the chance to 'run' with the great 'racers' in this exciting Marathon!

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/5/2023 1:14:00 PM

Dear Mark, the Rondeau form beautifully frames the silky rhythm, rhymes and romance flowing from your enchanted pen. The incredible poetic talent on display here and in your catalog is breathtaking. Congratulations for your golden trophy win and for your excellent overall finish in Mark's Marathon contest. Your presence in the race was inspiring, my friend, and I enjoyed running the many miles with you! It is truly a grand honor the share the podium with you, dear poet. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/5/2023 11:30:00 AM

Just lovely and so brilliant, in hues of passionate, promising, precious poetry... love it. Congrats. and God bless you, Love, Gina

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/5/2023 11:25:00 AM

Mark, congratulations on your wonderful 3rd place Podium win in the 2022 Poetry Marathon, which you are so very deserving of! I am so happy for you! Sandra ;)

Lin Lane

Date: 3/5/2023 6:22:00 AM

Mark, the Marathon was a challenge of great fun. I enjoyed the comradery of sharing many miles with you.

Mark Toney

Date: 3/4/2023 1:16:00 PM

Mark, congratulations on your Third Place, overall win in my 2022 Poetry Marathon! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of the contest. The poems of the 28 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post, along with the top 15 placements and their overall stats. Write on!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 3/4/2023 1:12:00 PM

I am always struck by how effortless a read of your poems is - just flawless meter and flow of thought, like a continuous pour of cool sweet water. Well done!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/10/2022 11:07:00 PM

A great work. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2022 1:42:00 PM

wow, gorgeous poetry. I had to look down to see that it is a big winner. Way to go, Mark, Congratulations,

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/9/2022 11:26:00 AM

Your first two lines draw the reader into the piece, enticingly. Such superb rhyming, too, in your delightful, rondeau poem. Congratulations! Best wishes. Brian

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/9/2022 10:09:00 AM

You set the bar pretty high here Mark, a difficult form to convey such a powerful message, but you made it look easy, and it flows just like satin should, congratulations on your deserving top spot, cheers David

Gary Radice

Date: 7/9/2022 6:42:00 AM

If there's one thing for sure, Poetry Soup opens my eyes to so many poetry forms that are new to me. Step forward the rondeau and - having read what constitutes such a form - step forward your wonderful winning example of such Mark. A big congratulations on your top win. Cheers - Gary

Valsa George

Date: 7/8/2022 10:48:00 PM

With no frills, love flows freely through the petals of a rose and nests in satin bliss ! Lovely poem ! Hearty Congratulations on your trophy win, dear Mark

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/8/2022 9:35:00 PM

Big CONGRATS to win TOP.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/8/2022 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with your "Satin Bliss." Have a great/blessed day.......................

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/8/2022 12:45:00 PM

A sweet suite, Mark, Aloha~William

John Watt

Date: 7/8/2022 12:01:00 PM

Mark, a sensational rondeau well worthy of your trophy win in the marathon. Your rose and its petals are a touching talisman of the beauty of enduring love. Heartfelt congrats ~ John

Mark Toney

Date: 7/8/2022 11:59:00 AM

Mark, a beautiful display of your poetic prowess using the Rondeau form. Congratulations on your first-place finish on Mile 6 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 7 has already started!