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desires were sated love fades but memories don't ~ whispers on silk sheets

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/11/2024 5:24:00 PM

Dear Lin, I loved how your poem beautifully captures the bittersweet essence of love's passage. Each line delicately displays the complexities of desire and memory. Your imagery evokes a sense of intimacy and longing, leaving a lingering contemplations in the reader's mind. Loved it! - Blessings, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 4/13/2024 7:11:00 AM

'Delicately' is what I had intended, Daniel, so thank you for seeing these lines through tender and intimate eyes.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2024 12:13:00 PM

ohh err very sensual and i love the pic Lin! hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 4/11/2024 3:49:00 PM

It caught my eye when I searched for the imagery I hoped to convey. It belongs on canvas.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2024 1:30:00 PM

I keep looking at the image with half closed eyes, it is very sensual :-)

Lin Lane
Date: 4/11/2024 1:28:00 PM

It would seem others think so as well. Thanks, Jan.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/11/2024 11:27:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Sated Desires" write/great picture. Few words with so much said. I hope you are OK... Have a fun day writing away.................

Lin Lane
Date: 4/11/2024 1:28:00 PM

I'm well, Paula and wish the same for you. Thank you enjoying my Senryu. I may attempt a version of this abstract painting.

Paul Bell

Date: 4/11/2024 9:27:00 AM

I like this backwards too.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/11/2024 9:37:00 AM

It does work both ways, Paul. The way I aligned it gave the sense that it was sadly over. Your suggestion would indicate their love was ongoing. I prefer your thoughts, but it is written, "All good things come to an end." Grateful am I that you gave these lines such depth of thought... appreciate you for having done so.

Don Iannone

Date: 4/11/2024 8:23:00 AM

Lin, Your haiku beautifully captures the enduring echo of intimate memories amidst the fleeting nature of love, leaving a lasting impression on the soul. Well done! Cheers, Don

Lin Lane
Date: 4/11/2024 9:38:00 AM

Thanks so much for your poetic comments, so eloquently delivered, Don.

John Lawless

Date: 4/11/2024 7:57:00 AM

I'm off to take a cold shower......nicely woven Senryu Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/11/2024 7:58:00 AM

Sorry, not sorry, John. Thank you. ;-)