Jan Allison Poet Clerihew

Santa Claus Clerihew 2

In the chimney Santa got stuck
Sorry kids you’re out of luck
Guess you’re going to have to wait
Till Santa is thin and loses some weight

Jan Allison
4th December 2014
Not for Contest

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James Fraser December 5, 2014 at 12:26 PM Aw, in a way we can't say Santa is greedy, as he was trying to bring presents to the kiddies. Still made me chuckle all the same, James xx Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 12:29 PM my santa claus poem is the one I've submitted for the contest - this is purely for fun:-) Hugs jan xxx

Sara Kendrick December 5, 2014 at 11:56 AM I guess Santa is in position to lose some weight if no one hoist down food except Mrs. Claus who will give him only good food..Ha!!Ha!!..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 12:00 PM thanks for dropping by sara:-) Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis December 5, 2014 at 11:17 AM Your delightful poem left me with a broad smile, dear Jan, fact that proves I am neither a kid nor... thin! Ho-Ho-Ho! Hugs! Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 11:21 AM lol thanks Demetrios:-) Hugs jan xx

Cherl Dunn December 5, 2014 at 10:32 AM Poor old saint Nick, he just ate to many cookies and drank to many glasses of milk, lol cheri Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 10:55 AM thanks Cheryl:-) Hugs jan

Wayne Riley December 5, 2014 at 9:51 AM All I can say is...ho ho ho!!!!!! Brill, Jan Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 10:30 AM thanks Wayne:-) Hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser December 5, 2014 at 1:43 AM You made me explode with laughter and spit my tea. That's a great one! Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 1:45 AM LOL ML I hope you have a tissue to clean your computer screen - and this isn't even the one I entered for the contest! hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 5, 2014 at 12:58 AM Wow thats a brilliant one Jan! Why not put in contest? Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 1:02 AM I put the first one I wrote in the contest I am still working on 2 more so may change my mind:-) Hugs jan x

Robert Johnson December 4, 2014 at 10:26 PM Tis the season for a little joy. Too bad those kiddie's have to wait for their toy. Enjoyed this funny little write Jan. Happy Holidays. Peace. :) Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 1:01 AM Thanks Robert:-) Hugs Jan x

Brenda Meier-Hans December 4, 2014 at 8:15 PM Well if nobody shoots cookies up the chimney it might not take to long. Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 1:01 AM LOL Thanks Brenda:-) Hugs Jan x

Frederic Parker December 4, 2014 at 7:34 PM left a smile on my face, well done Jan Allison December 5, 2014 at 1:00 AM Thanks Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus December 4, 2014 at 5:04 PM Santa was bound to run out of luck one of these days! Very good and most enjoyable. Hugs // paul Jan Allison December 4, 2014 at 5:07 PM Thanks Paul:-) Hugs Jan - did you get my reply to your mail? Hugs jan x

Nette Onclaud December 4, 2014 at 12:02 PM ohh my, a funny and delightful work, jan.. santa needs an overhaul; wonderful!,, huggs Jan Allison December 4, 2014 at 4:41 PM Thanks so much Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne December 4, 2014 at 10:49 AM The first one made me laugh more, but they are both good! Jan Allison December 4, 2014 at 4:40 PM Thanks Maurice - I have written 2 more I NEED to laugh! Hugs jan xxx

Casarah Nance December 4, 2014 at 10:35 AM HAHAHA that is friggin' funny!!! Jan Allison December 4, 2014 at 4:38 PM Thanks Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx

Hija De La Luna December 4, 2014 at 10:31 AM ahahaha!! love it, Jan! Jan Allison December 4, 2014 at 4:38 PM Thanks Hija:-) Hugs jan x

Joseph May December 4, 2014 at 9:48 AM haha... Very nicely done Jan. .best wishes Jan Allison December 4, 2014 at 9:56 AM Thanks Joseph - am in need a bit of light hearted humour:-) Hugs Jan x