Sandcastle Clouds

Devoid of ocean....
  
                  with ever changing magic

                                      my sandcastle clouds




Placement: 10th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 3:39 PM
a lovely scene! Paula would you consider doing an animal limerick for my contest? Too many folks doing limerick contests [sigh] Thanks! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 3:23 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 10:04 PM
A very interesting take on the contest, the sandcastles in the clouds! Congratulations, Paula!
Poet Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 7:35 PM
Congrats Paula on your win-kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Congrats Paula my friend on your top ten with in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry luv.. enjoy sweet success and victory tonight with luv..
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations paula on your 10th place. Agape, Moses
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December 6, 2010 at 4:37 AM
Well done Paula!!! congrats on your success in contest....luv Michael
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:23 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Paula
A  Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 9:42 PM
PAULA~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
Mannan Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Many congratulations Paula for this terrifc write and win.
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December 2, 2010 at 6:05 PM
enjoyed your poem,,, have anice one,,..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 4:25 PM
Very lovely Paula.. a perfect picture painted in wondrous words .. good luck my friend int he contest... enjoyed with luv..
Goff Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 2:38 PM
Paula....what I enjoy is the freedom you give the reader to build imaginary thoughts in the sky....with childlike innocence....cool effect! to my fav's!!!! jimbo (this is fun!)
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