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Sandcastle Clouds

Devoid of ocean.... with ever changing magic my sandcastle clouds Placement: 10th

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/26/2011 3:39:00 PM

a lovely scene! Paula would you consider doing an animal limerick for my contest? Too many folks doing limerick contests [sigh] Thanks! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Paula in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 10:04:00 PM

A very interesting take on the contest, the sandcastles in the clouds! Congratulations, Paula!

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 7:35:00 PM

Congrats Paula on your win-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:44:00 PM

Congrats Paula my friend on your top ten with in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry luv.. enjoy sweet success and victory tonight with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations paula on your 10th place. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 4:37:00 AM

Well done Paula!!! congrats on your success in contest....luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:23:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Paula

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:42:00 PM

PAULA~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/5/2010 8:43:00 PM

Many congratulations Paula for this terrifc write and win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 6:05:00 PM

enjoyed your poem,,, have anice one,,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 4:25:00 PM

Very lovely Paula.. a perfect picture painted in wondrous words .. good luck my friend int he contest... enjoyed with luv..

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/2/2010 2:38:00 PM

Paula....what I enjoy is the freedom you give the reader to build imaginary thoughts in the sky....with childlike innocence....cool effect! to my fav's!!!! jimbo (this is fun!)