Sand Clock

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As we speak, time goes by, tick ticking
           |   Sand is trickling down, slowly   |
	   |      Life goes on, seconds are      |
           |            turning to minutes          |
	   |              minutes to hours          |
	   |                Hours to days             |
           |                       DA                      |
           |                       YS                      |
           |               Turn to months            |
           |            Months into years           |
           |	      And we age with time        |
           |	    Time is not in our hands      |
           |     It stretches on from eternity   |
       To eternity, time’s sand clock never stops
		

21st February 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/24/2023 6:53:00 AM
Nicely done Jo! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/24/2023 6:03:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing these words of wisdom, poetically well-expressed... God bless you.
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Date: 2/24/2023 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2023 5:07:00 AM
Very creative! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:49:00 AM
- Congratulations, Jo :) - Creative and great :) - hugs
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Date: 2/22/2023 9:34:00 AM
Well done, Jo! Perfect! I’ve often thought about how much time existed before we were ever here and how it shall go on and on. God bless!
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Date: 2/22/2023 6:57:00 AM
Clever design, Jo. Time stretches to eternity--but we don't control. A powerful message!
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Date: 2/22/2023 6:39:00 AM
This is remarkable ! Both the poem and the shape are equally appealing. I envy you my friend ... Viewed it on my laptop. Perfect.
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Date: 2/21/2023 11:03:00 PM
Very truth. Time stops for no one, lovely shape
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