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'sand Castles Fading'

powerful water in conflict with the shoreline sand castles fading

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 3/5/2011 9:36:00 AM
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hi missy! how you doing today?? enjoyed this profound haiku from you-- love how your first line contrasts with your last line :) hugs to you sweetie :)
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Kash Poet
Date: 3/3/2011 7:12:00 AM
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Very nice Haiku with some philosophy Wilma.Enjoyed---kashinath
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/28/2011 8:54:00 PM
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Can't help thinking of fading dreams from lovers who were lying in these sandy fortresses, Wilma. Lovely!! Can't wait to get home Wednesday. Love, Carolyn
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 2/27/2011 2:22:00 PM
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Great images portrayed in these Haiku lines .. good luck if for the contest Wilma... unique expressive piece luv..
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James Peranteau
Date: 2/27/2011 5:35:00 AM
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A perfect Haiku dear poet ! And I'm the soul who'd build the sand castle; right on the shore line ! *smiles* Have a great weekend Wilma ! much love, james
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James Fraser
Date: 2/26/2011 8:03:00 AM
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The effort to make them takes little effort to break them. Wonderful Haiku Wilma....:)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/26/2011 12:48:00 AM
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Hi, Wilma. You did a great job with this. WAs it for a contest? I think I am calling it a night now. Luv ya, Andrea
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 2/25/2011 5:44:00 PM
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ohh, well- scribed, piece, wilma! :) huggs, nette
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 2/25/2011 12:44:00 PM
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beautiful visual you have painted with apt images, Wilma
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 2/25/2011 12:25:00 PM
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Its like the day feathering into the night... Your images put me there at the scene of this so nicely..love it !!!!! Luv Michael
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Joe Maverick
Date: 2/25/2011 12:24:00 PM
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good words in this haiku Wilma, enjoyed the themes.
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