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Sanctuary In Space

"Sanctuary in Space" whirling through the finite mystery of space galaxy a golden lightening bolt transcends time barrier orbiting to Earth penetrating tapestry arriving to transport my being on an express carrier. beyond pale cotton candy clouds, evading Planets, swirling past Mars waving hello to yellow Moon offering satin light whisking free on gossemar wings, touching stellar stars gliding toward Shangri-La sailing from Earth's destined flight. a magical gazebo awaits in white lattice and carved wood with swing to write love poetry in secret sanctuary caressed by rose petals beneath dome of Nature's hood as time stands still and quiet thoughts commence, so exemplary. pleasant melodies resound as golden leaves cascade into clandestine stratosphere where love embraces creation blue velvet waterfalls invade peaked pastel mountains fade escaping to my space-capade in Paradise elation. as the depth of distant winds tumble whimsical glow departure from my destination haunts reality seeking solace on a different level soothes the flow to close another chapter in a space journey fantasy. ... in my unique space odyssey ... *For Nathan's Deep Space Odyssey Contest... *Sept. 8, 2012.

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Date: 3/13/2014 2:35:00 AM
sweet write... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/8/2012 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Deep Space" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 11:24:00 PM
so beautiful...its an awesome poem friend Linda_Marie. Big congratulations on your win!! cheers!!!(^_^)
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:05:00 PM
So wonderfully written and beautiful !! I was there in space, seeing the wonderful scenes you created in words. Congrats on your winning spot in the contest !!
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:30:00 PM
congrats on a great win Linda
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:22:00 PM
LINDA, MY BFF, congratulations with your awesome poem in Nathan's THE LOVE OF MY LIFE "deep space" contest.. enjoyed~ xox~pd
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:03:00 PM
WON 7TH PLACE .. THANKXXX
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Date: 10/5/2012 3:47:00 PM
thanks for the support' nate
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Date: 9/11/2012 10:41:00 AM
You can nicely imagine with which you can adorn beautiful pictures with golden words, done it nicely here too. Good luck. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/10/2012 5:38:00 AM
nicely written....enjoyed....love...Joseph
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Date: 9/9/2012 12:11:00 AM
oh good one!
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Date: 9/8/2012 3:53:00 PM
Like the Beatles, 'Magical mystery tour' wonderful to read. love your unique space odyssey.
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Date: 9/8/2012 1:53:00 PM
SOOO LOVELY AND EXCELLENT RHYME YOU HAVE PENNED FOR THE THEME MY DEAR LINDA-M. PS!!! I feel like i am in the outer space. I love it sooo much especially the 4th stanza. There are many poems of yours which I've missed and I need to read them this week.Thank you so much for sharing! luv, leonora
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Date: 9/8/2012 1:43:00 PM
Linda, PD's bff, and one of the Greatest Poets in PS, HERE's MY WARMEST & HEARTFELT GRATITUDE for your stopping by leaving a very touching appreciation to my latest work, congratulatory comments and especially for your prayer and deep concern. Thank you so much for the BIG SUPPORT you're extending. I believe that these had made me feel better now. Thank you sooo much. It's also a great honor for me. My latest WARM CONGRATULATIONS ALSO IN ALL YOUR BIG WINS MY DEAR!!!!! YOUR SUCH GREAT POET TOO!
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Date: 9/8/2012 1:15:00 PM
awesome write, my friend - just love it. I've posted my half of our write - 3 verses now : )
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Date: 9/8/2012 11:09:00 AM
The gazebo in the sky, as a child you dream of such things you describe within this write my friend! This is a splendidly delightful trip of time and space, a great fun filled travel from somewhere out there in space back to Earth, to be filled of the love of what poetry brings! The beauties of what the Earth brings is beyond what space could ever desire to have, and you capture this beauty so perfectly Linda-Marie! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/8/2012 10:54:00 AM
The Space Journey with you, on the wings of your imagination was wonderful, amazing & splendid. For a moment I thought that I too was travelling on a spaceship and planets and Earth, Moon and stars were passing one by one like a dream sequence. Great and beautiful write my friend as always. I can understand how difficult it would be to transforms your ideas into words, when you have your acute problems. I have sorted out some medicines and hope to send you a soupmail perhaps by tomorrow. Ravindra
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Date: 9/8/2012 9:32:00 AM
Hi Linda, this is lovely, the rhyming is perfection, best of luck in Nathan's contest and I edited our poem, it reads beautiful to me. Love Constance
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Date: 9/8/2012 8:08:00 AM
rather intricate poem so taking my time so as not to lose any of it and get frustrated .. thankxx and please check back ..luv ..
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