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Greatness and creativity come from combining two or more ideas or concepts into one. Poetry is often a collaboration of these ideas. Whether we realize this or not I hope a few smile at these words.

Nether and far, darkness among stars A painless realm daunting hidden charm Neutrons and Adams, the beginning Above the heavens, gods even sinning Crimes of the universe Negatives and positives Black holes letting the evil escape Crippling this world with Left over hate Tears overwhelm And saturate Ubiquitous whims In rhythm sings At fates door No more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/1/2017 11:18:00 AM
I think this is about depression and darkness, if so many kisses, peace and love xoxoxoxo
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Date: 7/20/2017 5:28:00 PM
Very interesting existential musings, Arthur. Expressed w/ visionary acumen. A poetic pioneer you be. Trailblazers are never truly accepted in their lifetime. A deep, thought provoking write. Love always.
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Date: 7/14/2017 9:01:00 AM
A pleasant and enjoyable read Victor thank you for sharing.
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Date: 7/8/2017 2:18:00 AM
Your poem dances my friend. No more hate!
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Date: 7/7/2017 7:44:00 PM
great words my friend......Seren
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Date: 7/6/2017 12:56:00 PM
such chemistry in your poem where opposites attract,arthur... clap, clap!..huggs
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Date: 7/5/2017 10:05:00 AM
Great write Arthur! "Crippling this world with left over hate" great line.
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Date: 7/5/2017 7:40:00 AM
A terrific poem der Arthur...that first stanza is awesome and the rest doesn't miss a beat.
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Date: 7/4/2017 9:50:00 PM
Oh, this is a killer! Love it, so clever!
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