Greatness and creativity come from combining two or more ideas or concepts into one. Poetry is often a collaboration of these ideas. Whether we realize this or not I hope a few smile at these words.
Nether and far, darkness among stars A painless realm daunting hidden charm Neutrons and Adams, the beginning Above the heavens, gods even sinning Crimes of the universe Negatives and positives Black holes letting the evil escape Crippling this world with Left over hate Tears overwhelm And saturate Ubiquitous whims In rhythm sings At fates door No more
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