Winged Warrior Poet Sonnet

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Sailing For Love

My love can part the oceans,
But it hasn’t reached your shores…
Sailing in the breeze with emotions,
As my heart rudders and explores.

Within the mist of heartaches,
The thunder passes through…
Shattering sorrows of earthquakes,
Exposing the love I have for you.

The deep sea swallows my soul,
I’m drowning in ambient aquatic…
Resurfacing amidst the Devil's Hole,
A delusional drift by evil’s erotic.

Sails are down the anchor thrown,
A lighthouse dims of love unknown.





June.21.2019
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Darlene De Beaulieu June 28, 2019 at 10:49 AM Hello Winged Warrior, I just read this poem. oh how wonderful it is.I have never read such a lovely poem as this one. It has the ocean and the sea in this poem filled with love. You have out did yourself. Have a nice day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger June 23, 2019 at 3:52 AM "I’m drowning in ambient aquatic… Resurfacing amidst the Devil's Hole," This made me smile in its attempt for humbleness. This poem is bold and beautiful though! I was shocked to hear a woman's voice when I listened to the video. Expecting a man's. Winged Warrior June 23, 2019 at 9:09 AM Thank you Caren...your presence is welcomed beyond measure...just a virtual voiceover my friend...sending love...^WW^...{*J*}

Panagiota Romios June 22, 2019 at 2:56 PM I agree with Connie! That you are one the best here! And far more than an HM. That's for sure. You, WW, are truly inspiring. Panagiota Winged Warrior June 22, 2019 at 5:57 PM Thank you so much Pani...you make all the difference in the world...lots of love my friend...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong June 22, 2019 at 1:48 PM I totally agree with Lin. This is a treasure seemingly undiscovered! Another Fave from me. The sadness of your ending lines felt almost palpable. You are one of the master poets here at Poetry Soup my friend! I loved reading this gorgeous offering. A first place in my opinion! : ) Winged Warrior June 22, 2019 at 3:59 PM Thank you kindly my dear Connie...your presence is my first place...sending love your way...^WW^

Lin Lane June 22, 2019 at 10:43 AM This deserved much more than just an HM. Love the first two lines, J. Winged Warrior June 22, 2019 at 11:58 AM Thank you so much my dear Laney...hope you are doing well my friend...sending love your way :0) ^WW^

Arturo Michael June 22, 2019 at 4:03 AM Well done...music and poem...could have been longer Winged Warrior June 23, 2019 at 9:14 AM Thank you, my dear friend, Arturo...the peaceful face of your avatar brings me sereneness...holy you are...lots of love...^WW^

John Hamilton June 21, 2019 at 10:40 AM Loved this WW you should do more sonnets, this is great! Winged Warrior June 23, 2019 at 9:17 AM Thank you Johnny Boy...love your encouragements...sending love...^WW^