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Sailing for Beginners

If only I could be, wiser, to chaos, before it catches wind, & takes me with it's tides. As an aside... would you be so kind, as to send out a searchlight, for it appears I have delved, haphazardly, into the deepest ends of my turbid, little mind.

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Date: 6/11/2024 3:38:00 AM
A good title and description. A lovely poem. Well written.
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Kate Davies
Date: 6/18/2024 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Daisy, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 6/10/2024 7:33:00 PM
This is a deep poem about deepest waters. I enjoy it's imagery. Your mind doesn't seem muddled when you write, since your poems are fantastic.
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Kate Davies
Date: 6/18/2024 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Hilda, sorry it has taken me so long to reply, writing helps the muddle I must say!

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