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Sahara

I press along this arid wasteland Thirsting for your eyes beneath A mirage of low stars, and in the Sahara of copper dunes, your fragrance Becomes an oasis for these parched lips. Alone, as stretchmarks deepen The curved lines of thoughts, Heated winds carry your breath sweet And damp upon my neck; while one Tiny cactus pierces my skin with faint longing. Whitsun Premier Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/22/2014 6:31:00 AM
Wonderful images, I enjoyed your trip through the desert
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Date: 9/21/2014 3:44:00 PM
wonderful imagery Carly many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2014 12:16:00 PM
- Just came back to congratulate you on your win Carly!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2014 9:53:00 AM
Big congrats on your great write and fine win!!
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Date: 9/21/2014 1:57:00 AM
this is just so GOOD. I love your imagery. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:39:00 PM
Brilliant Carly, loved the last line - thought provoking...Congrats
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Date: 9/20/2014 2:56:00 PM
wow...I was hooked from beginning to end, carly... a very tender, well-expressed piece with Sahara of dune on my mind...proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs
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Date: 9/20/2014 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your amazing poem Carly and your big win.
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Date: 9/20/2014 5:26:00 AM
Congrats on the top place win, Carly
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Date: 9/15/2014 11:12:00 AM
- Hi Carly, I like your suggestion for this contest - Lovely done (I just posted one - my is also about Sahara) - Good luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2014 8:01:00 PM
Excellent write! Good luck with the contest! Pandita
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