David Drowley Poet Limerick

Saguaro

There once was a shutterbug named Louie
Whose dry humor was a trifle screwy.
To a saguaro he said
Hands up lest I shoot you dead.
A shot; a flash; kablooey went Louie.

Date: 07/01/2019
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Robert Johnson July 10, 2019 at 10:36 AM So clever, it almost went right over my head. I was so busy counting meter. :) Congrats David and I'm loving reading all these wonderfully different limericks.

Nette Onclaud July 9, 2019 at 5:34 PM you have a good funny bone, david... congrats on your win!..huggs

Janice Canerdy July 7, 2019 at 6:24 PM Good one, David. CONGRATS! Janice

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2019 at 5:31 PM oh I love that last part: kablooey went Louie. Congrats on your win

Line Gauthier July 4, 2019 at 3:21 PM Very colorful, David. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison July 4, 2019 at 11:40 AM what a fun poem David, congrats on your win:-)hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 4, 2019 at 10:49 AM Giggles! ...oops! ;D Congrats on your win! xomo

Charles Messina July 4, 2019 at 9:10 AM Congratulations on your win David. With this humorous Limerick. ~Charlie

Kim Rodrigues July 4, 2019 at 9:03 AM Ooh! Love the action in this one! Congratulations, David!

Tania Kitchin July 4, 2019 at 8:56 AM David, congratulations with your win in the contest, loved the last line!

Ann Foster July 3, 2019 at 4:07 AM Yes. This was fun. :) Ann