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Sage Advice

If at first you don't succeed, I have some advice Don't try skydiving, you may pay the ultimate price Dying's really bad enough While you're dying hurting is tough Tried it but once but there sure won't be a twice

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Date: 12/2/2018 12:56:00 PM
Oh JAck.... Never give up... And so nice to see you posting your barrel of laughs!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/2/2018 4:33:00 PM
Silly eh!!! Laughter makes my world goes round! LOL
Date: 12/1/2018 9:51:00 PM
drowned once...apart from a brief panic it was painless peace quiet astral
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/2/2018 5:43:00 AM
Holy holy holy... are you serious!!! Well, thanks for the info...but I still ain't skydiving anytime soon!!! LOL "quite astral" eh!!! Love, Happy Jack XOXOX
Date: 12/1/2018 9:00:00 AM
Lol! ;)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/1/2018 9:14:00 AM
So so silly eh!!! LOL XOXOX

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