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Saffron Charms

You charm the petals that grace the bloom, smoke stops its steep as your walk hits the room In a single breath you glisten the stars, laying a claim from venus to mars A butterflies touch that heals the mind, words and phrases that flow sublime A Truth of beauty from the mother, a voice for many no man can smother Searching the sky her face tilts the sun, lighting the world our beacon of one Fighting with right by her side, making her way through thought in rhyme A saffron wake she leaves behind, to follow her message merging heart into mind A Comfort in words the jarring ones too, she makes my day this is never more true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/10/2009 10:54:00 AM
As priceless as saffron this piece Jayne, beautiful piece>>James,xx
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Date: 9/7/2009 9:12:00 AM
Jayne, thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I am behind in reading I am so busy right now. I am glad I did take a break and read this. Thank you for your comments on my poetry it was appreciated. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2009 6:41:00 PM
owh the first. this is a wonderful piece. the rhyming the phrasing the ideals, you have that rare tallent and the determination to make it real poetry. you get a pass from me kid. A + John Henry Loving III
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