Sad Times
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He demands and he growls
my chest grows cold and quiet
I struggle for the words
I hear the sounds of my breathing
the swish of air in, then deeper downward shush
my chest moves more deeply
I am afraid of his anger, sharp snapping words
my voice rises high pitched — just leave me alone, I am tired
His voice rises and high and loud, I am the one at fault
I take deep breathes and hear the gentle sounds
puff, waft slowing down, gentler sounds
I plead for quiet, there is a huffing sound from across the room
My voice was shrill, and my loud pleading made it worse
I am expected to be my old self, when words came easily
my tumor halted that near the left lobe, crack and hush
Its not numbers and computers click click,
it is tissue and brain quiet, my breath its only sound
desperate shrillness increases our voices
It reveals the fears hiding in the shadows
angry fears, ice cracking, deep growls
although I understand, can I live with it
much longer, breathe, breathe
shush, shush
We are both wrong I hear the tension the snapping pain
The rustling moaning sound in both of our minds
This is not the way I hoped to live nor die— soft sigh.
Copyright © Linda Milgate | Year Posted 2020
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