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27771055 - bedroom with moonlight and smoke - Advanced Sleep Technologies,  Inc. |

oh, You ... you found me again unveiled amid the bosom of my dreams - my consciousness peeled back and flayed tabled in a twilight mist for the memories of you to feast upon drowning in the fathoms of your gaze your scent ? pouring its alert fascination into my marrow the tang of your pulpy tongue the sweet confection of your skin, resplendent (and the warm, wild places beneath it) - vessels and walls and fair, tepid flesh your intent within it all - to conduct me while allowing me the sway? to exploit my exploitation of the moments - letting me control your control of me coy, seductive smile on your face perfecting your line and movements as a ballerina should … it is all still there as if the years since were phantoms gone with a breath of irresolute regret … and you inhabit me now as then as EVER preying on my sleep-time meanderings without mercy, without bridle? without an ounce of benevolence or pity … oh, You - no other vexes me so completely so purely no one pervades my nettled dreams as you do nor will anyone - ever … morning always comes too soon, blushing and much, much too bright for the love that we both swore eternity to - that we knew with all conviction to be as sure as starlight as dire as death itself and as deep as the sea of suns is now nothing but a damp blemish ... on my pillow.

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Date: 4/29/2021 9:39:00 AM
Gregory, Congratulations in Brian Strand's contest!!
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Date: 4/27/2021 2:40:00 PM
there is that amazing Bardenesque style. Amazing, and congrats on the big win (I failed miserably this time)
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Date: 4/27/2021 6:09:00 AM
BRILLIANT Big Congrats to win TOP
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Date: 4/4/2020 4:46:00 PM
Gregory this was amazing! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 4/4/2020 2:43:00 PM
Strong imagery, Greg-- congrats on your win, my friend!
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Date: 7/11/2018 10:17:00 AM
Yeah Greg, beautiful phrasing that is uniquely you, engulfed in a twilight mist, drowning in the fathoms of your gaze, impeccable writing...your ballerina still haunting your dreams...I see!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/11/2018 10:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, my good friend, I'm really pleased you enjoyed it! Yeah, she will always be a deep-seated love, without closure, (as are one-or-two others, but she by far the deepest) ... a consistent muse, I guess, and perhaps that's what lost love is meant for us "sensitive, creative" types. I sometimes wish I DIDN'T feel so deeply ... I imagine you can relate. Blessings, John.
Date: 7/7/2018 8:05:00 AM
Hi Gregory, this is Beautiful!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/9/2018 8:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! :-)

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