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Written on August 7, 2023

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Weaving a web, light Falling in shafts of weightless Ingenuity Laughing like stardust Reflecting silent moments Does it catch the fly? Gloating in colors Hues of delicate sunlight, Risking graceful rays, Will she catch his thoughts In her web, imagining Graceful traces, sparks Pure perfection, warmth In whispers, melancholy Floods her spirit, light Chasing rainbows, nice In passionate embraces Soothing storms, rainfall Sighs in the spirit, Falling on her web, will she Discover dewlike Tears flowing down, soft Against the fabric, her maze? Silently blowing Winds healing, gently Carrying her rich supplies, Insects, a diet Colorful creatures Will her web never fail her? Like this blessing, her Silent moments spent Waiting patient, the stalker Will she ever quit? Grow tired of her game, The chase never doubts, haunting Claims to forget, she’s Forever catching Rays brought to life, reflections Between her network Silent moments, dreams Bugged by flies, beetles, insects Who wish she’d resign But, truthfully, she Is forever spinning webs Always so grateful For her fare of bugs Creation’s been good for her, Spider’s fantasy Nirvana, splendor In shape of delicacies, She’ll eat her goodies, STALKER ‘til the very end!

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Date: 8/24/2023 1:55:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing the wonders of our Creator's wondrous works through your creative muse. God bless you.
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Date: 8/21/2023 2:03:00 PM
What a lovely spider's tale you have woven Gina. Gorgeous in its imagery! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 8/21/2023 10:54:00 AM
Nice poem with great imagery. Winner.
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Date: 8/20/2023 8:26:00 PM
Hi Gina, such amazing images woven in delicate lines like a spider's web - lines like "shafts of weightless ingenuity!" Simply amazing! Congratulations on your win! Hugs and blessing sweet friend!
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Date: 8/20/2023 6:19:00 PM
Wow, Gina! It is always fun to see who wrote each winner. Great idea, great imagery! … Bugged by flies, beetles, insects Who wish she’d resign, laughing like stardust…gloating in colors. Congratulations on 2nd place!
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Date: 8/7/2023 4:22:00 AM
I didn't expect your stalker to be an arachnid, but better a spider than a person! Your Choka never loses sight of its purpose.
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