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Ryan, Where Are You

Ryan, Where are You?
Oh Ryan, please tell me, where are you? I'll never forget that tragic summer of August 1992, when you left without even bidding a final adieu – not even a single wave good-bye, just leaving us high and dry. How could you just simply disappear? Like a dark shadow, in a grey mist...not really there? Gone to heaven or God knows where? My dear Ryan, did you think we really wouldn’t care? One day you're enjoying the sunshine, doing so well; the next day buried in a cold grave where you now dwell; You always said that tomorrow’s not promised to anyone. Now, you’ll never get to see another glorious sunset or dawn.
I heard you were run over by a Brooklyn-bound train. But neither the police nor the coroner could adequately explain - was your death instantaneous or did you suffer any pain? Please help me to understand - who’s to blame? Please tell me - was it just an untimely death? Please explain to me - was it just your fate you met? At birth, did the Three Fates your destiny set? Or were you just in the wrong place at the wrong time... an innocent bystander who hadn’t committed any crime? When Atropos cruelly severed the thread of your short life, the incredible pain of losing you cut deep like a butcher’s knife. But, my dear brother, your treasured memory will be with us always, through your children and in our hearts ‘till the end of our days!
05-23-2014 Contest: Favorite Poem You've Ever Written Sponsor: Carol Eastman Placement: 1st

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Date: 9/20/2014 4:01:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on my poem Remembering you Brother. I enjoyed reading your poem about your brother shows care, concern and ultimately forever love. Can't wait to read more of your poetry.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/21/2014 1:13:00 PM
Hi Nedra, thank you very much for selecting my poem to read and thank you for your kind compliments and support. I will most definitely read more of your works! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 8:31:00 PM
This is such a sad, tragic write! I truly feel your pain especially since I lost my own son under similar tragic circumstances! Kika
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Date: 8/29/2014 9:59:00 PM
We share the pain, dear Kika! God bless you and comfort you always! Pandita
Date: 7/9/2014 4:28:00 AM
Pandita, This kind of loss is only helped by time and I am so sorry for yours. My prayers are with you too Connie
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/9/2014 2:49:00 PM
Thank you dear, Connie. As the saying goes "No Man is an island... each man's grief is my own." Kindest regards and best wishes!
Date: 6/17/2014 11:32:00 AM
WOW! I can see why it means so much to you... Thank you for entering my contest with this poem! Congratulations on the win. It was amazingly sad and touching. And of course, I'm sorry for your loss... Your friend.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/17/2014 5:55:00 PM
Hi Carol, my friend, thank you so much for honoring me with a placement in your contest. I truly appreciate your compliments and kind support. Best regards.
Date: 6/16/2014 5:51:00 AM
Extremely sad ,, well penned Pandita ! cud really feel the pain as I too hv felt wid my best frnd ,,, congrats on top win !
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/16/2014 6:58:00 AM
Dr. Upma, thank you for your compliments and support which are very much appreciated!
Date: 6/15/2014 7:50:00 PM
So sad for everybody that knew Ryan, especially his family. Hugs from Seren
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2014 7:53:00 PM
Seren, my friend, thank you so much for your warm support which I so very much appreciate! Best wishes to you!
Date: 6/15/2014 7:07:00 PM
thanks for the reply Pandita...PD
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Date: 6/15/2014 7:02:00 PM
How sad. Accidental deaths are so pointless. Congratulations on our win. Love, Joyce
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2014 7:23:00 PM
many thanks, dear Joyce, for your kind compliments and support that means a lot to me. Warmest regards.
Date: 6/15/2014 4:45:00 AM
Pandita, this one is definitely an emotional piece for your brother, I suppose. Congrats for the win. Mohan
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2014 12:09:00 PM
Thank you dear Mohan for your kind compliments - Yes, this one was a sad write about the loss of my own brother. have a nice day!
Date: 6/15/2014 2:18:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your favorite poem, congrats on the well deserved win, Pandita
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2014 12:10:00 PM
Hi Dr. Ram, thanks again for your kind compliments! Kindest regards.
Date: 6/15/2014 12:11:00 AM
Awesome win. Love ~SKAT~
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2014 12:12:00 PM
Thank you so much for your usual kind compliments, SKAT. Have a great day!
Date: 6/14/2014 10:59:00 PM
Pandita. Congratulations with your own "Favorite Poem, entered in Carol's XOOL contest... Yeah, we all Win... What a sweet Deal... XOX~ LINDA
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2014 12:00:00 AM
Hi Linda, I love this win and congratulations to you on your sweet win as well! YEAH!!! Have a great weekend!!!
Date: 5/30/2014 11:42:00 AM
Hi Pandita, I wanted to come by and say hello also let you know it's a pleasure to meet you and read your incredibly gifted writes and this one brought tears to me. I hope the days are full of calm rainbows and I'm sorry for this pain~ Hugs. I say all the time~ Love to you. now say it here Love to you, Love and Peace, Deborah
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/30/2014 12:02:00 PM
Hi Deborah, you are so sweet! I thank you for your heartfelt support and kindness to me. I truly appreciate it all! Love and Peace to you too, my friend.
Date: 5/28/2014 4:52:00 AM
I agree, the pain in your tragic write is truly bottomless, and I sympathise deeply...Keith.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/28/2014 8:59:00 AM
Keith, I truly appreciate your kind words of support. Thank you so very much!
Date: 5/27/2014 6:57:00 AM
A very painful poem to read but I'm pleased I read it . I hope in putting your thoughts into such loving words , The ache in your heart eases.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/27/2014 7:40:00 AM
Darren thank you for your kind support. Yes, this poem really helped me to release a lot of the pain.
Date: 5/26/2014 3:27:00 PM
I can feel your pain and the longing for closure coming through in every line. This was very expressive, Pandita. I'm sure this was not easy to write about, but I admire your courage for doing so. Well done!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/26/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thanks very much, Kelly. This was a difficult write but I felt it was timely to get it all out by putting it on paper. Thanks for the support!
Date: 5/25/2014 10:15:00 AM
This is so sad... untimely death who knows when. Great pen of a lost feelings. May the grace of peace be with you and your family.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/25/2014 10:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comments and support. I really appreciate them!
Date: 5/24/2014 12:07:00 AM
Thank you, Robert for your kind sentiments. Unfortunately this one is sadly based on what happened to my younger brother. And I am glad that I could memorialize him through this medium.
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Date: 5/23/2014 11:49:00 PM
A great write, I hope it is not based on a sad reality my friend. Very sorry if its based upon a family tragedy..
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/28/2014 12:03:00 PM
So sorry to read of this tragic loss. My 13 year old brother was electrocuted and died in 1976, I was 22 at the time and it utterly destroyed me for about 7 long years. I know the sorrow and the long black cloud that blocks out light for so long...
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/24/2014 12:08:00 AM
Thank you, Robert for your kind sentiments. Unfortunately this one is sadly based on what happened to my younger brother. And I am glad that I could memorialize him through this medium.

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