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Rust

Some sages struggled and discussed Protective ways to battle rust. The answer came from every brain: Do not leave iron in the rain! Though some may scoff and will, I trust, The scholars will remain nonplussed; For simple wisdom we may gain From words that rusty saws contain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/24/2011 9:46:00 PM
good luck in the contest,,... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
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Date: 12/22/2011 3:03:00 PM
Another fine job with your descriptiveness and rhyming, Ilene. I'm beginning to find your work interesting.
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Date: 12/22/2011 8:06:00 AM
very captive ilene...patrick
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